请英语好的朋友帮助纠正一下我的写作：“Hi, guys. I think maybe it would be。。。”
I am very sorry to bother you, but I have encountered some problems recently. I think it might be the best to ask for your help.
Last semester, after I kept seeing the counselor, I got a "special consideration" which proved that my condition could affect my exam result. Unfortunately, however, I failed "XXX" (use course name/code directly here). I wrote a number of emails explaining the situation to Professor XXX who is the coordinator of this course, but I think he may still did not (在比较正式的书面文件里避免使用缩写) take my "special consideration" into account. According to the subject outline, students must score a minimum of 40% on the final exam which means 20/50. I got 18/50, which made me felt terrible. In the meantime, however, I believe I have the potential do better than this as my condition had "severely affected" my study. I think maybe it is possible to pass this course if my "special consideration" has been considered.
Sorry to hurt you but i didn't mean to. Hope it won't influence your study or life. I think maybe i can not quite understand your love to me. We have no idea of each other's life before, how we are going to communicate in the future, our values of love. Maybe you just feel lonely for staying in China all by yourself. Anyway, thank you for all the beautiful moments you bring to me. I suggest we get to know each other better in the few months when you stay at home. If you have the same feeling to me next time we meet, then it will be my hornor to get into your life and become your other part.
希望采纳
Hi, guys. I think maybe it would be helpful if there was a visible demo online for the assignment 1, so I built a very simple demo site and put it on the web server (Url: `XXX`). Come and see if the things I built is on the right track.
Since my writing ability is quite limited, how about I do the database part of this assignment, so that at the mean time, I can create some real data using mySql for the programming part.
上面是我修改的，修改处如下：
there has改为there was，这是there be句型的虚拟语气
加了so，逗号两边不能接两个独立的句子，加入一个连词so就可以了，同时还可以表明两句话之间的联系
put on改为put it on，put on是及物动词短语，必须有宾语
See改为Come and see，有了邀请之意，小伙伴们才明白是你要让他们去看方案是否可行
limit改为limited，这是形容词，有限的
data dictionary改为database，数据库，资料库，如果你用的data dictionary是你们的专有名词就不用改啦
so and改为so that，“这样的话”的意思，使语意更加通顺
could改为can，这个是将来时，不需要用过去式
a改为some， 因为data是不可数名词
use改为using，这是现在分词表修饰
就是这样了，希望对你有帮助哦~
there has 应为there was
put on应为put it on
see后面的if 改成whether
limit改成limited
at the mean time不对吧，你是想说at the same time ?
how about.......if so ,.......改成if so更好
use改成using
还有些句子的意思好像不太对，我也不敢乱改。有问题的话欢迎追问！
嗨,伙计们。我想也许是很有帮助的,如果有一个可见的演示在线赋值1,我建立了一个非常简单的演示站点,穿上web服务器(Url:“XXX”)。看看我建的东西是正确的。
因为我的写作能力很限制,我如何做这个任务数据字典的部分,所以,同时,我可以创建一个真实数据使用mySql的编程部分。
i think it may be (might )比较委婉
about how i do
so 和 and 不要连词两个一起用 直接用 awhile 与此同时的意思 at the mean time 去掉 整个句子显得简明扼要一些。
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