请英语好的朋友帮助纠正一下我的写作:“我不是那种喜欢把自己的伤疤揭开来让别人同情的人,所。。。”

kuaidi.ping-jia.net  作者:佚名   更新日期:2024-08-02
关于我的朋友的作文英语

My friend
Her name is Si Yuan. She is also one of my classmates.She has short hair and bright eyes.She looks very lovely. She is a smart girl, but sometimes she looks a little ''crazy''.
I do a better job than her in study. I hope that she can study very hard with me from now on then we will be deskmates again when we enter the ''A-class'' with very good marks(重点班可以理解为A类班....其他的不好翻。。。这句话的意思是:我希望她能从现在开始和我一起努力学习,以优异的成绩考上重点班再次做同桌).
June is coming soon. I hope all my friends could make our dreams come true.(放飞梦想在英语中可以翻译成实现梦想。。。)

1.
Hello, everyone! My name is Xing Xiaoqing. You can call me Cherry.
I’m in Class 0506. Li Nan is my best friend. She’s thirteen years old. Her birthday is on 3rd October and she was born in Shen Zhen. She lives with her family in Haimen. She’s 1.60 metres tall. She has black hair and she wears glasses. She is very lovely and pretty.
She likes eating dumplings, chocolates, peanuts and vegetables. She dislikes pork, sweets and green tea.
She loves listening to music. She has lots of CDs. She likes reading and writing. She is the newest member of the Maths Club. She has many hobbies, such as dancing, running and playing computer games. Her favorite hobby is drawing, because she likes all the different colors. It is fun to look at the pictures when she finishes drawing them. The Dragon Boat Festival is her favorite day. She wants to be a doctor when she grows up.
We always have fun. We sit under the trees at lunchtime and have a good chat. Sometimes, we buy snacks from the tuck shop. On Sunday, we usually go to the bookshop. We often study together.
My best friend is really great!

2.
My best Friend
Li Yan,my best friend,is my classmate. She has big eyes. Her long hair is often plained.Sweet smile is often on her face,which makes her more lively.
LiNan is very clever.She is good at her school subjects. She has won the school scholarship twice,I always take her as my model in study. She tells me that we should make good use of time.
Li Yan is kind-hearted and is always ready to help others,Any student in my class who has trouble in study likes asking her for help. But she doesn’t like others to praise her, because she thinks what she did is ordinary.
I feel proud to have such a friend.
3I have a good friend.Let me tell you something about my good friend He is a boy.He is studying at Great 7.He is very thin and very tall.and he is kind.When I got into trouble.He aways gave me his hand.I'm very love to made a friend with him.what about you?Do you like my friend?

I am not that kind of person who shows others his wound to win sympathy, I haven't told most of my friends in Australia about my misfortunes. The reason I am telling you my circumstances in this letter is because I really can't take the fact of failing this class. I swear that all those that I mentioned in the letter are real, I sincerely and strongly beg you to reconsider these facts below and let me pass the class.
1. 第一句看不懂
2. My actual knowledge of this class;
3. The effects to me of failing this class.

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