请英语高手帮我修改一下这篇文章的语法错误,急!
I feel tired every day. I live in a small house with my son and my mother. I need to work hard for them. My husband and I divorced a long time ago. My son became very introverted since then. My mother was 70 years old, she is nagging and old but she cared about me and my son a lot.
I didn’t know since when does my son start to go against my mother. They are always arguing with each other. They often fight over small things. For instance: My mother complained that my son didn’t do well on his test. My son would complain that my mother moved his stuff.
Whenever they quarrel, I will always be worried. They are both important to me; therefore I cannot hurt any of them. I came to the U.S when I was 36 years old. I have been lived here for 8 years. When I found that I am getting older and older, I suddenly realize that I left China for a very long. I feel sad and miss my homeland.
“Walk it out!” I said to myself. The night's wind is pleasantly cool. I was walking aimlessly and got to a wonderful place before I noticed. ” Here? “ I remember it was a dirty place not long ago, but now, it is a beautiful garden!”
“Do you like here?” a black woman asked me,” I have complained to the government about it. I wondered why the Government didn’t clean it up. But now I figure that it may be something that I should help with.” She was smiling at me and pointed to another girl” She is Kim, She is growing Lima Beans. Do you want to try it?”” of course! My name is Ping, Nice to meet you!” “I am Leona, Nice to meet you too!” Kim looked no more than 10 years old. She was nice and offered me a lot of help.
I calm down now. I will not try to run away. I have to work even harder to help with the communication between my love ones so that they can understand each other better.
提点意见：语法其实还好，重点是你写的是 中式英文.. 几乎每句都要改、你最好不要用中文的思维来写，像“I feel sad slowly” 懂中文的人还能大概理解你的意思，可外国人一定读不懂..
如果句子前后没有转折的意思，就不要用but来连接，例如：“Kim looks no more than 10 years of age, but she was very hot tips to help me.” 小孩也是可以热心的..
另外，说完一个句子就要用句号，英文不像中文..一堆逗号，句子短点没什么不好的，起码不容易有语法错误
希望能帮到你。~
单词错误：
1.第一大段最后一行the teacher said to hime中，hime应该改为him
2.第三大段，第一行 people havederived 中havederived应该分开写，即写成have derived
语法错误：
1.第一大段第二行，Yu boya famous music master at that time句子成分残缺，没谓语，应该改为Yu boya was a famous music master at that time.
以上都是细微的小错误，但本着严谨的态度，我觉的有必要指出
读了好几遍了，发现错误真的很少的，可能就这些吧
另外，我想问楼主，哪里找到这么好的文章的啊，经典故事啊，读起来很有趣哦
5：你的书写格式应该是每段开头第一个单词对着上面段落的第二个单词，这样才是正确的书写格式，也更好看，错落有致。5：你的书信在后面用上了secondly 来阐述你申请该大学的理由，但你在前面饼没有用上firstly,或者相类似的结构，我建议你在“in1911,HKU ”的1911加上firstly.6:Secondly, BJ,LLB and BFIN are my ideal curriculum.I'm keen on journalism and hope to take up something这句中你用take up是想说“学习，选修（课程）”但take up只有“占用，占据”的意思，这里直接用take 就可以了。
我个人认为就这些了，顺便说句你的英文真的很不错，用上了很多地道的结构和高级的词汇，希望我的回答可以对你产生一定的作用。
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