帮我修改下这篇英语短文
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帮忙修改下这篇英语短文
these
days”，倒数第二句应为“and
getting
a
good
grade”。因为手机上看不了你的段落情况，所以只能检查一下语法方面的啦。
我帮你修改了~~改完后如下：
How to fall in love with study?
We always fall in love with others, like the hansome men or the beautiful women. But today, I have some questions:can we fall in love with study? and how?
When we were very young, we had to learn a lot of different things, like maths and other subjects. However, actually, we were not fond of that. We prefered music,but cannot listened to it everyday. Now, I want to say"fall in love with learning"! I will spend more time on study by myself from now on.
I believe that we can fall in love with study. It is never too old to learn. If I fell in love with it, I would find the joy in it. That sounds perfect! Why not have a try to fall in love with it?
希望你满意！
Hello,everybody!I'm glad to give a speech here.Today I want to talk something about how to fall in love with learning?
We always fall in love with people,like handsome men and beautiful women,but
today,I have a problem whether we can fall in love with learning and how to fall in love with learning?
when we are quite young ,we have to learn a lot of different thing,like msths and many other subjects that we aren't fond of .Actually we like music,but we can not listen to it everyday,now,I want to say something about falling in love with learning?I will spend more time in learning myself, I believe you can also fall in love with learning,it is never too old to learn.If I fall in love with learning,I will find the enjoyment in it.That sounds perfect,shall we have a try? Why not?
Let's get down to it together--- fall in love with learning !
是几年级的作文的？随便改了一下
how to fall in love with learning?
we always fall in love with something, such as our family, friends, or attractive people. But my question today is can we fall in love with learning and how?
when we are in our childhood, we are required to learn a lot of things, say, maths. But we don't actually have interest about these things. For example, most of us love to listen to music, but aren't allowed to do so everyday. Now, I wanna say I wanna to fall in love with learning. And I would like to spend more time with learning as my companion...
i believe i would fall in love with learning one day. it is never too old to learn. if I do want to love learning, I will! Isn't it exciting? Should I have a try? why not try it now?
第一篇改的还不错,不过也有几个小错误.我帮忙改动下.哈哈
How to fall in love with study?
We always fall in love with others, like the handsome men or the beautiful women. But today, I have some questions:Can we fall in love with study? and how?
When we were very young, we had to learn a lot of different things, like maths and other subjects. However, actually, we were not fond of that. More ofen we prefered music,but we cannot listened to it everyday. Now, I want to say"fall in love with learning"! I will spend more time on study by myself from now on.
I believe that we can fall in love with study. It is never too old to learn. If I fell in love with it, I would find the joy in it. That sounds perfect! Why not have a try to fall in love with learning now?
帮我改一篇英语短文,谢谢各位~~~
答：请问你是做的改错题还是自己写的作文？如果是改错题。。我改的有点面目全非，但是改出来的应该没什么语法错误的，而且保证有长句和短句。但是由于有些句子我不知道你再说什么所以就按你的句子我就不改了（The significance of this movie is their children, both happiness and sadness happened.）。PS...
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可以请帮我修改英语作文3篇吗?
答：总的说来，写的不错。第三篇修改如下：One day, Tom went home after school and he asked his mother for some money. Tom's mother didn't understand why, so she just took out his money. Then Tom took the money away quickly and ran away. His mother was very angry and ran ...
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帮忙修改一下英语短文
答：Light music is a simpe form to express the emotion. They can produce the romantic environment in which we can feel relax. This kind of music don’t mention some terrible things or serious thing. They just let us enjoy them.Most of light musics are American musics or English ...
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答：but my mother washing the clothes now.She is very hard.How
请专业人士帮我修改一下这篇英语作文。
答：初中你这个水平就不错了,但是hobby这个词不要滥用,我给你来个大学水平的.As a staunch advocate of healthier living, I find many students in my class developed bad eating habits which I'd like to address by providing some useful advices.Many students often skip their breakfast and ...
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答：Dear Editor,In order to make my parents happy,I never went to went -> go Internet bars, dancing halls or other crowding places. crowding -> crowded I like reading book or doing my homework or -> and at home while listening music. But during every winter listening...
楼上的朋友已经改的很好了。我想在说几句个人意见。
我觉得题目换成A plan for my holiday更好一些。
I'm not good at it。前加上一个Because会更好，连接起来更自然，文章更连贯。
最后一行的So后面加上一个逗号更好。do some sports 换成do some exercise会更好，比较地道。
以上纯属个人观点，仅作参考。
你作文写的挺好的 基本没错误 但是有的地方需要小改进一下
eg.
Finally ...perfect well...exams
--> Finally ...perfectly well... 应该把形容词改为副词
It’s normal to lose the competition.
--> It's normal that we lose the competition sometimes. However,the most... 这样改是觉得衔接会好点 仅供参考 你原来写的没有错误
还有就最后一句the road to success will be smoother 个人觉得逻辑不是很对 即使永不放弃也不代表着通往成功的路会变的更顺利 困难不会因为不放弃就不出现了 只能说你的坚持会使成功几率更大些
可以这样改...if we never give up, we will be more likely to achieve success in the years to come/ in the future.
另外，在最后可以进行一下升华，比如加一句名言“where there is a will, there is a way” 有志者事竟成 跟你的主题契合
these
days”，倒数第二句应为“and
getting
a
good
grade”。因为手机上看不了你的段落情况，所以只能检查一下语法方面的啦。
我帮你修改了~~改完后如下：
How to fall in love with study?
We always fall in love with others, like the hansome men or the beautiful women. But today, I have some questions:can we fall in love with study? and how?
When we were very young, we had to learn a lot of different things, like maths and other subjects. However, actually, we were not fond of that. We prefered music,but cannot listened to it everyday. Now, I want to say"fall in love with learning"! I will spend more time on study by myself from now on.
I believe that we can fall in love with study. It is never too old to learn. If I fell in love with it, I would find the joy in it. That sounds perfect! Why not have a try to fall in love with it?
希望你满意！
Hello,everybody!I'm glad to give a speech here.Today I want to talk something about how to fall in love with learning?
We always fall in love with people,like handsome men and beautiful women,but
today,I have a problem whether we can fall in love with learning and how to fall in love with learning?
when we are quite young ,we have to learn a lot of different thing,like msths and many other subjects that we aren't fond of .Actually we like music,but we can not listen to it everyday,now,I want to say something about falling in love with learning?I will spend more time in learning myself, I believe you can also fall in love with learning,it is never too old to learn.If I fall in love with learning,I will find the enjoyment in it.That sounds perfect,shall we have a try? Why not?
Let's get down to it together--- fall in love with learning !
是几年级的作文的？随便改了一下
how to fall in love with learning?
we always fall in love with something, such as our family, friends, or attractive people. But my question today is can we fall in love with learning and how?
when we are in our childhood, we are required to learn a lot of things, say, maths. But we don't actually have interest about these things. For example, most of us love to listen to music, but aren't allowed to do so everyday. Now, I wanna say I wanna to fall in love with learning. And I would like to spend more time with learning as my companion...
i believe i would fall in love with learning one day. it is never too old to learn. if I do want to love learning, I will! Isn't it exciting? Should I have a try? why not try it now?
第一篇改的还不错,不过也有几个小错误.我帮忙改动下.哈哈
How to fall in love with study?
We always fall in love with others, like the handsome men or the beautiful women. But today, I have some questions:Can we fall in love with study? and how?
When we were very young, we had to learn a lot of different things, like maths and other subjects. However, actually, we were not fond of that. More ofen we prefered music,but we cannot listened to it everyday. Now, I want to say"fall in love with learning"! I will spend more time on study by myself from now on.
I believe that we can fall in love with study. It is never too old to learn. If I fell in love with it, I would find the joy in it. That sounds perfect! Why not have a try to fall in love with learning now?
答：请问你是做的改错题还是自己写的作文？如果是改错题。。我改的有点面目全非，但是改出来的应该没什么语法错误的，而且保证有长句和短句。但是由于有些句子我不知道你再说什么所以就按你的句子我就不改了（The significance of this movie is their children, both happiness and sadness happened.）。PS...
答：你的小作文语法掌握得相当不错，只是我提出一点修改意见供你参考：1）I am a student of Grade Nine in 2)made up of 不如用composed of更好 3）teachers漏了个a 4）emotion表示深厚的感情，是不可数的，所以不要加s 5）从努力学习、相互帮助转到运动会比较突然，时态也一下改了，这里最好有个...
答：Editor,Hello!I'm a student ,i have some questions to talk with you. I find some students have eyesights problems .But we all are know that students have to study hard,so they must read many books frequently.But they read under a very bright sunshine or at night if there ...
答：1. ate - had （吃早饭：have breakfast）2. surfing the internet , too . - surfing on the internet also .3. I'm eating breakfast . - I'm having breakfast .4. and eating lunch , too. - and having lunch at same time .
答：总的说来，写的不错。第三篇修改如下：One day, Tom went home after school and he asked his mother for some money. Tom's mother didn't understand why, so she just took out his money. Then Tom took the money away quickly and ran away. His mother was very angry and ran ...
答：请注意冠词的用法，如果名词前没有冠词的话，必须把可数名词换成复数形式 比如：use a computer;use computers;use the computer;use thecomputers 唯独不能说use computer 引用【冠词是一种虚词，是最典型的限定词，本身不能单独使用，只能附在一个名词上帮助说明名词的含义。是名词的一种标志。英语中...
答：Light music is a simpe form to express the emotion. They can produce the romantic environment in which we can feel relax. This kind of music don’t mention some terrible things or serious thing. They just let us enjoy them.Most of light musics are American musics or English ...
答：but my mother washing the clothes now.She is very hard.How
答：初中你这个水平就不错了,但是hobby这个词不要滥用,我给你来个大学水平的.As a staunch advocate of healthier living, I find many students in my class developed bad eating habits which I'd like to address by providing some useful advices.Many students often skip their breakfast and ...
答：Dear Editor,In order to make my parents happy,I never went to went -> go Internet bars, dancing halls or other crowding places. crowding -> crowded I like reading book or doing my homework or -> and at home while listening music. But during every winter listening...
