可以请帮我修改英语作文3篇吗？
三篇
1篇 The number of people using WeChat, a voice-message service developed by the Internet giant Tencent Holding Ltd, has hit 300 million in the less than two years since the service was released, the Shenzhen-based company said on Wednesday.
Analysts said WeChat is “very likely” to gain another 100 million users over the next 12 months.
“If the number of mobile Internet users continues to expand at the present speed---- if it hits 550 million by the end of this year---- the number of users will certainly rise to 400 million, ” said You Tianyu, senior analyst at the market research company iRearch Consulting Group. WeChat’s prospect(前景) will be closely aligned(使一致) to the number of people using mobile devices(设备) in China,he added. By the end of last year, 420 million Chinese people were using the Internet with moblie devices, up 18 percent year on year, according to the China Internet Network Information Center. WeChat was launched on Jan.12,2011, and took more than a year to draw 100 million users. By September, it had reached the 200 million mark, said Tencent. Tencent QQ, the most popular online-chatting service in China, is actively encouraging its users to try WeChat, said You. He noted that QQ has more than 700 million users, a fact that made it easier to promote WeChat. WeChat is also posing challenges to older means of telecommunications, such as text messages and phone calls.
【写作内容】 1.以约30个词概括上文内容 2.以约120个词谈谈你对“微信”的想法，内容包括： （1）微信的积极意义； （2）微信可能会给人们带来怎么样的危害？请举例说明。 （3）我们该如何合理使用微信？
2篇 Local authorities in China have rushed to seal（密封）up some meat products in fast food chains, including McDonald’s and KFC, after one of their supplier(供应商) was accused of selling no longer fresh meat. The move came in response to media and public outcry after a Shanghai TV station exposed Shanghai exposed Shanghai Husi Food Co., Ltd., a supplier to a string of fast food brands, including McDonald’s and Yum Brands., for selling products with rotten(变质的)meat and meat beyond its expiration date(有效期). The expose made Shanghai authorities prevent production at Shanghai Husi, a unit of US-based OSI Group, on Sunday, while cities and provinces across China on Monday moved to seal Husi supplies at local food chains. The expose was another blow to Western fast food chains such as McDonald’s and KFC, which have been involved in a number of food safety scandals(丑闻）involving suppliers over the years. China Food and Drug Administration on Monday ordered local authorities to investigate all the
food factories with investment from OSI Group in the provinces of Hebei, Shangdong, Henan, Guangdong and Yunnan.
【写作内容】 1.以约30个词概括上文内容 2.以约120个词谈谈你对“食品安全”的想法，内容包括： （1）目前食品安全吸引了公众的不少关注； （2）造成食品安全问题的原因； （3）你认为应该怎样解决食品安问题。
3篇 Two years ago，when I was an oversea student，I worked early mornings and late nights to pay for my school fees. One day，I was seriously ill with a very high fever.I had stayed at home for a few days，and I had run out of food.Because I had been in this town just for a short time，I also had no friends nearby who could help.So I went out to get some food.I would have gone to the supermarket，but on this occasion，I went into a small store because it was closer. I picked up a few items.When I handed them to the shopkeeper，she said，“You are unwell.” “Yes，”I nodded. She pointed at the sausage(香肠) and bread I was buying and offered，“I can make you a sandwich，so you don't have to do it yourself.”So，she made the sandwich and asked me to wait a moment.She went in the back room and returned with a bowl of hot soup. “It will warm you up.”she said with a genuine smile. What really warmed me up was not the soup，but her kindness.It made me want to be as kind as the shopkeeper who had been kind to me. [写作内容] 1．请你以约30词概括上文的主要内容。 2．请你以约120词以“善举的影响”为话题谈谈你的想法，内容包括： (1)上文使你回忆起曾经有谁的爱心举动使你感到温暖。 (2)在感到温暖之余，你是否受到这个举动的影响，是否会把这份爱心传递下去？为什么？ (3)进入大学校园后，你将如何继续传递爱心？
Different from the fast food films, those real classic films reflect social reality, human
nature, and the value of life. And leaves audiances profound impressions that might be cherished deep into the their heart, their soul,and their memory.
The shawshank redemption is exactly such a real classic film like this. Although this film didn't win the Award of Academy in the year when it was nominated, no one would ever deny the very truth that this film was so impressive that deserves the evaluation: uncrowned king.
The shawshank redemption tells a story about hope.The banker, Andy has been thrown
into the jail,for the wrong judgement made by the court. Even throgh, to him it was an unjust treatment, Andy didn't lose his perseverance, sincerity and wisdom,and won respect from most of his jailmates.At the end of the film, after year when Andy's prison break finanlly end up with a completely success, bring him back to ther freedom; when Andy and Rheet once again, meet each other at the beach, facing each other with a sincere smell, this moving senario is also to be cherished, long in people's mamory, and shall finally become classic.
额~ 不知道我的思路楼主受不受用~ 工程太大了~ 要是这样写觉得太挫了就算了~ 先小搞了一下第一篇。。。。。。。。。水平有限。。。
One day, Tom went home after school and he asked his mother for some money. Tom's mother didn't understand why, so she just took out his money. Then Tom took the money away quickly and ran away. His mother was very angry and ran after him. When Tom's mother saw Tom lining at the donation box, she was moved and thought :"How great Tom is!"
第二篇修改如下：
Boys and girls,
April, 23 is the World Reading Day and it is a global festival. Reading books is not only interesting but also can help open our view and help us learn more and more. Reading books can also change our mind and our ways of thinking. It can make us brave and confident in doing things. There are some good places for you to read books: Book Club, Book Corner, etc. In my view, every student should read one or two good books. it is very useful for us. If you are ready, please start your reading.
第一篇修改如下：
From:zhangmeng@163.com To:chlw524@sina.com
Subject: problem
Date: June 26
Dear Ms Li:
I'm very glad to write to you.
I always work very hard and have less rest because I always stay up for doing homework. And I don't have enough time for doing exercises. I am not happy: I can't watch TV, listen to the music or surf the Internet at home. My life isn't lively and interesting. What can I do?
哎呀，你这个问题比较很大啊，如果可能的话，你在联系我。。。这个几句话说不明白啊，，QQ359ll6l54
太多了，不行啊
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