英文高手请进！！！（参祥以下内容有什么毛病没有，如有拜托帮忙改一下））
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英语问题，高手请进（在线等）
"I respectfully offer myself for the post. "我刚查了才知道原来post也有“职位”的意思，但是感觉总是怪怪的，总觉得用"position"会比较自然。如果想让语气看上去更尊敬的话可以把这句写成"I would like to ..."的形式。
"I have been serving for over 5 years in Guangdong Provincial People's Hospital."
首先，这句话没有写明自己的职位，可以用"I have been serving as a/an ... in Guangdong Provincial People's Hospital for over 5 years."
其次，以自我介绍来说这句似乎太短了一些，不能很好的体现自己的专业水平。可以适当增加一些关于自己学历的内容，比如"As shown in the attached document, I got my degree of ...（学位） in Sun Yat-sen University in ...（年份）"之类的，不用怕跟第二段的简历重复，相反这样还能起到着重指出的作用。
"So I must to say that I have long been hopeful of working for your hospital after graduation"
这一句感觉有些突兀，如果能在这句前面加上一两句对这个医院的赞赏的语句看上去会比较合理。不加的话开头的"so"就可以去掉，因为这里没有明确的因果关系。"must to say"的语气有点过强，建议用"would like to say"；"long"可以去掉；"hopeful of working for"可以改成"looking forward to work for"；另外这里用"after graduation"有点怪怪的，用"for a long time/for many years"似乎会更自然一些。
"that I have the privilege of"这里用"privilege"想表达的意思是什么？"I will greatly increase my experience and my education."这句没有错，但表达上有点怪怪的，反正这一句想表达的是自己的收获，同招聘单位没有直接联系，所以就算去掉也没什么影响的。
"I hope to have the pleasure of your granting me an interview."（It would be my pleasure if you granting me an interview.）纯粹个人意见，原句完全没问题。
"I am enclosing a personal data sheet which I think will adequately show you my qualifications."这里没必要用"which I think..."，可以直接说"... sheet showing my academic qualification and professional experience"
我印象中书信格式最后署名应该是：
Yours
Sincerely,
XXX
（仅供参考）
第二段最后的"PROFESSIONAL EXPERIENCE"部分，也建议加上自己的现任职务。
水平有限，只发现两个大小写问题：Zhongshan University；Guangzhou
另外，Madam即可，Madame好像是法语吧 !——
I have been serving for over 5 years in Guangdong Provincial People's Hospital. 这句先说地点再说时间会更好些吧
“ am sure that I have the privilege of serving in your hospital,”这句什么意思？“我有特权在您的医院服务？”什么特权？
a personal data sheet 可以改为 resume（简历的意思）
前面“I must to say”用的严重了些，“I have to say”就行了吧
be eager to do就是渴望热望have been本身就表示持续不用加long
“I will greatly increase my experience and my education. ”这句不太好，好像是要去人家那里练手一样。说一说主观上会努力工作什么的会比较好。个人见解，仅供参考。
关注你的帖子，一起学习短文改错。^_^
April 6,2007
P.O.Box 3
zhongshan University
guangzhou,China 510000
Dear Sir／Madame,
With reference to（to 改为of,因为reference 是名词） your advertisement in Guangzhou Daily for Surgeon, I respectfully offer myself for the post（POST改变position,贴切一点）.
I have been serving for over 5 years in Guangdong Provincial People's Hospital. （最好后面注明岗位，as…….）
So I must(must 太生硬了，用有能力胜任，这句话你可改为so I am able to server for your hospital after graduation )to say that I have long been hopeful of working for your hospital after graduation, I am sure that I have the privilege of serving in your hospital, I will greatly increase my experience and my education. (同时简历中不要写太多的在你们公司能够学到什么，这个要避免，因为工作是希望你能付出，而不再是学校)
I hope to have the pleasure of your granting me an interview. （改为waiting for your interview,不要很突出我想怎么样，应该委婉一点）
I am enclosing a personal data sheet which I think will adequately show you my qualifications. （工作中的英语是希望简洁明了，你只须说明附件中是我的简历）
Sincerely,
Li Ping
（第二段）：
Li Ping
Tel: 020-3721-8037
Email: Li Ping@yahoo.com.cn
Add: No.29 Guangsan Road, Tianhe District, Guangzhong
PROFESSIONAL EXPERIENCE
EDUCATION
Jan. 1996 :
Sun Yat-sen University,Guangzhou, China
M.D.
February 1992:
Sun Yat-sen University, Guangzhou, China ,
Master of Medicine.
PROFESSIONAL EXPERIENCE
1997-present:
First Affiliated Hospital of Sun Yat-sen University
没有错哦~挺好的~~~~
没什么大问题
(高分)英语高手请进,自我介绍,急用.谢谢.!
答：mysely in his class,at the same time ,all my classmates love him.So now I have a strong will to learn English so that I can speak fluent English like him in the future.首先申明不是机器翻译。按你的题目来看，你的英语应该不是很厉害，所以没有用很深的语法。花了我不少时间。
英文高手请进入
答：并请参考知识+ 内容移除标准，避免因违规而被移除或扣点。」-->「移除标准2.6重复发表相同的文字内容例如：转贴其他网友发表之问题或答案」 详见.knowledge.yahoo/info/content_guideline 2012-02-05 12:45:39 补充： gps*** 1.Let me know which one you do not agree to. 2....
英语选择题(名词性从句)!!英语高手请进!!谢谢!2
答：所以是whatever.（No matter what是引导状语从句，状语从句不属于名词性从句的）。（ ）happens缺主语就用whatever.13.请问空格在哪？？？14.英文就这样，反正只要你的回答是肯定的，就是Yes，不管问句怎么问。believe后面是宾语从句，缺宾语，用what，不能No matter what是因为它是用于状语从句的。
英语高手请进:求英文邮件翻译!悬赏100分!拒绝电脑翻译!
答：the Chinese New year;3. Stock: I took the screenshot of the bank's webpage for your reference.In addition, I provide you with the name of my reference person in the company - "XXX".Thank you very much and I'm looking forward to hearing from you.全人工翻译请参考。
高分悬赏 英语翻译以下内容 高手请进! 要求准确,无误!
答：Nantong permanent prosperous petroleum machinery Limited company attention:Delivers goods when please provide together this instruction booklet and the product certificate to the user.Jiangsu Province Hai'an County Qu Tangzhen industrial park telephone:facsimile:website:
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答：英语高手请进!!!帮帮小弟 关于"中西方色彩词汇对比"的文章帮我找几篇!!最好是英文的,中文的也可以... 关于"中西方色彩词汇对比"的文章 帮我找几篇!!最好是英文的,中文的也可以 展开 1个回答 #热议# 作为女性,你生活中有感受到“不安全感”的时刻吗?Dawn...
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英语高手请进!帮忙翻译(中译英)一段文
答：Row Unna many · reaches · Fenqi the attention: Hong Kong and Taiwan translated work Dawenxi English old name: Leonardo Di Ser Piero Da Vinci is alive the time: on April 15th, 1452 - May 2, 1519 attention: Reaches · Fenqi is not the surname, but is expressed that meaning...
英语高手请进!!木兰从军简单的英文翻译(初一学生能听懂的)
答：Chirp chirp, mulan when jehu complex knitting. No, but JiZhu smell smell female sigh.Asked what woman thinks that what, ask a female. No woman, no thoughts and memories. Last night, see army soldier, khan big book volumes have twelve roll, ye. AYe without big son, eldest ...
英文高手请进!求一首歌的翻译(英译中)有原歌词
答：在那有清心的战士 传说会实现的地方 Wish upon a star Believe in will The realm of the king of fantasy The master of the tale-like lore The way to kingdom I adore Wish upon a star Believe in will The realm of the king of fantasy The master of the tale-like lore The way ...
The students celebrated New Y ear’s Day ___by___holding a party.
by通过某种方式
：(1)What__is__your computer___used__(use)for?
be used for 被用来做什么
(2)You may go out and piay as soon as your homework____finished_(finish)
过去分词表被动，一旦你的作业被完成，你就能出去玩
英文名最好不要起什么moon，sun 之类的，外国人没有叫这种名字的，暮雪 可以叫
Michelle
和暮雪的读音很像
词来源于法语，意思是像神一样的人，可以翻译成米雪儿，英文中还有紫菀花的含义
"I respectfully offer myself for the post. "我刚查了才知道原来post也有“职位”的意思，但是感觉总是怪怪的，总觉得用"position"会比较自然。如果想让语气看上去更尊敬的话可以把这句写成"I would like to ..."的形式。
"I have been serving for over 5 years in Guangdong Provincial People's Hospital."
首先，这句话没有写明自己的职位，可以用"I have been serving as a/an ... in Guangdong Provincial People's Hospital for over 5 years."
其次，以自我介绍来说这句似乎太短了一些，不能很好的体现自己的专业水平。可以适当增加一些关于自己学历的内容，比如"As shown in the attached document, I got my degree of ...（学位） in Sun Yat-sen University in ...（年份）"之类的，不用怕跟第二段的简历重复，相反这样还能起到着重指出的作用。
"So I must to say that I have long been hopeful of working for your hospital after graduation"
这一句感觉有些突兀，如果能在这句前面加上一两句对这个医院的赞赏的语句看上去会比较合理。不加的话开头的"so"就可以去掉，因为这里没有明确的因果关系。"must to say"的语气有点过强，建议用"would like to say"；"long"可以去掉；"hopeful of working for"可以改成"looking forward to work for"；另外这里用"after graduation"有点怪怪的，用"for a long time/for many years"似乎会更自然一些。
"that I have the privilege of"这里用"privilege"想表达的意思是什么？"I will greatly increase my experience and my education."这句没有错，但表达上有点怪怪的，反正这一句想表达的是自己的收获，同招聘单位没有直接联系，所以就算去掉也没什么影响的。
"I hope to have the pleasure of your granting me an interview."（It would be my pleasure if you granting me an interview.）纯粹个人意见，原句完全没问题。
"I am enclosing a personal data sheet which I think will adequately show you my qualifications."这里没必要用"which I think..."，可以直接说"... sheet showing my academic qualification and professional experience"
我印象中书信格式最后署名应该是：
Yours
Sincerely,
XXX
（仅供参考）
第二段最后的"PROFESSIONAL EXPERIENCE"部分，也建议加上自己的现任职务。
水平有限，只发现两个大小写问题：Zhongshan University；Guangzhou
另外，Madam即可，Madame好像是法语吧 !——
I have been serving for over 5 years in Guangdong Provincial People's Hospital. 这句先说地点再说时间会更好些吧
“ am sure that I have the privilege of serving in your hospital,”这句什么意思？“我有特权在您的医院服务？”什么特权？
a personal data sheet 可以改为 resume（简历的意思）
前面“I must to say”用的严重了些，“I have to say”就行了吧
be eager to do就是渴望热望have been本身就表示持续不用加long
“I will greatly increase my experience and my education. ”这句不太好，好像是要去人家那里练手一样。说一说主观上会努力工作什么的会比较好。个人见解，仅供参考。
关注你的帖子，一起学习短文改错。^_^
April 6,2007
P.O.Box 3
zhongshan University
guangzhou,China 510000
Dear Sir／Madame,
With reference to（to 改为of,因为reference 是名词） your advertisement in Guangzhou Daily for Surgeon, I respectfully offer myself for the post（POST改变position,贴切一点）.
I have been serving for over 5 years in Guangdong Provincial People's Hospital. （最好后面注明岗位，as…….）
So I must(must 太生硬了，用有能力胜任，这句话你可改为so I am able to server for your hospital after graduation )to say that I have long been hopeful of working for your hospital after graduation, I am sure that I have the privilege of serving in your hospital, I will greatly increase my experience and my education. (同时简历中不要写太多的在你们公司能够学到什么，这个要避免，因为工作是希望你能付出，而不再是学校)
I hope to have the pleasure of your granting me an interview. （改为waiting for your interview,不要很突出我想怎么样，应该委婉一点）
I am enclosing a personal data sheet which I think will adequately show you my qualifications. （工作中的英语是希望简洁明了，你只须说明附件中是我的简历）
Sincerely,
Li Ping
（第二段）：
Li Ping
Tel: 020-3721-8037
Email: Li Ping@yahoo.com.cn
Add: No.29 Guangsan Road, Tianhe District, Guangzhong
PROFESSIONAL EXPERIENCE
EDUCATION
Jan. 1996 :
Sun Yat-sen University,Guangzhou, China
M.D.
February 1992:
Sun Yat-sen University, Guangzhou, China ,
Master of Medicine.
PROFESSIONAL EXPERIENCE
1997-present:
First Affiliated Hospital of Sun Yat-sen University
没有错哦~挺好的~~~~
没什么大问题
答：mysely in his class,at the same time ,all my classmates love him.So now I have a strong will to learn English so that I can speak fluent English like him in the future.首先申明不是机器翻译。按你的题目来看，你的英语应该不是很厉害，所以没有用很深的语法。花了我不少时间。
答：并请参考知识+ 内容移除标准，避免因违规而被移除或扣点。」-->「移除标准2.6重复发表相同的文字内容例如：转贴其他网友发表之问题或答案」 详见.knowledge.yahoo/info/content_guideline 2012-02-05 12:45:39 补充： gps*** 1.Let me know which one you do not agree to. 2....
答：所以是whatever.（No matter what是引导状语从句，状语从句不属于名词性从句的）。（ ）happens缺主语就用whatever.13.请问空格在哪？？？14.英文就这样，反正只要你的回答是肯定的，就是Yes，不管问句怎么问。believe后面是宾语从句，缺宾语，用what，不能No matter what是因为它是用于状语从句的。
答：the Chinese New year;3. Stock: I took the screenshot of the bank's webpage for your reference.In addition, I provide you with the name of my reference person in the company - "XXX".Thank you very much and I'm looking forward to hearing from you.全人工翻译请参考。
答：Nantong permanent prosperous petroleum machinery Limited company attention:Delivers goods when please provide together this instruction booklet and the product certificate to the user.Jiangsu Province Hai'an County Qu Tangzhen industrial park telephone:facsimile:website:
答：英语高手请进!!!帮帮小弟 关于"中西方色彩词汇对比"的文章帮我找几篇!!最好是英文的,中文的也可以... 关于"中西方色彩词汇对比"的文章 帮我找几篇!!最好是英文的,中文的也可以 展开 1个回答 #热议# 作为女性,你生活中有感受到“不安全感”的时刻吗?Dawn...
答：all free of charge education. 一石激起了千层浪，有媒体称之为是“中国最牛教育强镇”，石排的高福利教育到底是怎样来进行的？ 1 sparked a wave of media called a "strong town of China's most cattle education," Shek Pai's high welfare education in the end how to work? 他们为何...
答：Row Unna many · reaches · Fenqi the attention: Hong Kong and Taiwan translated work Dawenxi English old name: Leonardo Di Ser Piero Da Vinci is alive the time: on April 15th, 1452 - May 2, 1519 attention: Reaches · Fenqi is not the surname, but is expressed that meaning...
答：Chirp chirp, mulan when jehu complex knitting. No, but JiZhu smell smell female sigh.Asked what woman thinks that what, ask a female. No woman, no thoughts and memories. Last night, see army soldier, khan big book volumes have twelve roll, ye. AYe without big son, eldest ...
答：在那有清心的战士 传说会实现的地方 Wish upon a star Believe in will The realm of the king of fantasy The master of the tale-like lore The way to kingdom I adore Wish upon a star Believe in will The realm of the king of fantasy The master of the tale-like lore The way ...
