下面一段英语,请帮我看看有无语法错误,谢谢。很快采纳
真的,语法错误不是一点点,你应该好好补补了。最关键的是一个句子只有一个谓语你知道吗?I accept the truth is that I must face the problems will be probably happened in the future study. I really felt my English is much more better than before。句子而且都很生硬,完全是汉语式英语。
给你改一下:
Thank you so much for your reply and advice. I've thought over your suggestions very carefully. I accept the truth that I must face the problems which will probably happen in the future study. If I cannot solve the English difficulty, how could I face the challenges of professional problems. I should not excuse that I did not get good scores just because of some accidents happening during the test. However,I want to say, I feel my English is better than before after when I found the most deficient part of my English. From then on I kept studying everyday. Could I have the chance to be conditionally accepted if you have not made the final decision? The situation would be changed if I take English class and study hard day after day. No one knows how powerful the human potetial is and it is difficult to say what will happen in the next few months.
好好对比一下,这样没有语法错误了,但是句子还有些生硬,没有办法,我是一句句按你的句子修改的。
音乐是上天赐予人们的礼物is wrong
should be那首曲子是上天赐予人们的礼物
sorry can't type chinese
1.Poetry is a different with other forms of literature.
different是形容词,要与from连用。应该改为Poetry is different from other forms of literature.
2.may be can用的不对,be 和can都是动词,应该为 A good poem may change one’s whole life in a short time.
3.I couldn’t help loving this poem because within such single words can tell the essence of life.
can tell the essence of life前缺少主语,应该为I couldn’t help loving this poem because within such single words it(指那首诗) can tell the essence of life.
其他的没什么问题了。一篇很好的作文。
楼至再仔细看一遍我的意见,希望能帮到你。
Poetry is different from other forms of literature. A good poem may change one’s whole life in a short time. Actually, poetries have a great influence on me. When I first read a poem called S, written by W. I couldn’t help loving this poem because within such single words it can tell the essence of life, and the comfortable feelings come from rhythm Without doubt, I learned a lot from that poem, such as how to write a high level poem in an effective way. In addition, poetry is a form of art. That provide me an opportunity to put into my soul to appreciate art, finally, I could catch the mood of beauty when I write a poem.
Poetry is different from other forms of literature.
A good poem (may be) can change one’s entire life in one second.
I have learned a lot from that poem(对现在有影响用完成时)
how to write a high level poem in an effective way
It gives me opportunities to enjoy and appreciate art,
没有问题哦!看过了!!!1
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