请帮我看看下面的一段英文有语法错误没，如有帮我修改下，谢谢
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请帮我看看这段英语有没语法错误..请帮我指出来修改下. 谢谢了大神们帮帮忙
who share the same interest with me
such as pizza......
music is another reasons which attracts
I love staying with my friends and we enjoy talking about new movies and all funny things happened during the week
That is the most wonderful moment in my daily life(但是你前面说一个星期里的趣事，但是如果这里说daily life，意思就是你每天都会来这里，那就不是一个星期里的趣事了)
That place provides.... for releasing pressures from work and study
其实有些也不能说是错，只是也许这样说会好一些
希望楼主找到自己喜欢的表达方式
按前后顺序： same 前加the；there is因为food不可数；reason 和attracts中间加that，不可省的，因为在从句中做主语…同时go前加to；staying那句就特别错喽………建议改成staying with them spares us time to talk about the things that happens in a week.地道些～；provide加s………总结下，楼主要注意时态哟！尤其是单三的变化哦！加油
下面一段英语,请帮我看看有无语法错误,谢谢。很快采纳
答：2.may be can用的不对，be 和can都是动词，应该为 A good poem may change one’s whole life in a short time.3.I couldn’t help loving this poem because within such single words can tell the essence of life.can tell the essence of life前缺少主语，应该为I couldn’t help lov...
请帮我看看下面的一段英文有语法错误没,如有帮我修改下,谢谢
答：I love staying with my friends and we enjoy talking about new movies and all funny things happened during the week That is the most wonderful moment in my daily life(但是你前面说一个星期里的趣事，但是如果这里说daily life，意思就是你每天都会来这里，那就不是一个星期里的趣事了)Tha...
请英文高手帮我看看下面的英文有哪些语法错误,在线等,很快采纳._百度知...
答：真的，语法错误不是一点点，你应该好好补补了。最关键的是一个句子只有一个谓语你知道吗？I accept the truth is that I must face the problems will be probably happened in the future study. I really felt my English is much more better than before。句子而且都很生硬，完全是汉语式英语...
请高手帮我看看下面一小段英文有无语法错误,帮改下,很快采纳
答：This book (is) just a simple diary about （a）man. What attacts me there（可去掉） is the author's spirit of dedication and pursuit about(改为of) dreams. A man faces thousands of difficulities in(去掉in) every day. Each problem could drive one person（可去掉）to despire（...
帮我看看这篇英文有什么语法错误,谢谢
答：第1段，第1行：that后缺动词，建议改成 ... that there is a flame with smile ... ；去掉And，there is 改成 There is also ... ；word 改成 phrase ；第2行：... flame that ... 改成 ... flame says that ... ；第3行：warm 改成名词 warmth ；who 引导的从句挪到 people ...
请大家看看下面的有没有语法错误
答：1。China Ren Min University 2. And my job is senior clerk 3. I wen to the CIQ to assistant their work, from 2008 to 2013 4. I used to work in GHS billing office at 2009. 5. I am a careful person, and I love to learn.6. I cooperate well with my colleagues, and ...
帮忙看看下面英文有无语法 错误
答：很纯粹的汉语机器翻译。语法存在较大问题：修改如下：Now I have seen that it is so difficult to forget you again that I have to avoid bringing everything about you in mind .I don`t know how long the things in my mind will last ,but just know I miss you so muchat the ...
可以帮忙看看这段里有什么语法错误吗?急!在线等!
答：In one word有错。总之是in a word vegetables and fruits has less fat 有错。是have。另外，dieting是节食。节食就一定是不吃肉吗 hypertension and coronary heart disease and so on 不要and so on keep healthy 不是health hit two birds with one stone,isn’t it? 我觉得有点怪。isn't...
英语,请帮我看看以下英语文章有没有语法错误
答：典型中国英语，语法错很多。没有耐性看的话会晕死。请多读地道英文书，多练笔。I have three hometowns，because my father was born in He nan, my mother was born in He bei province, I was born in Tingjing, my father works in (Xi'an)XA. I moved there three years ago。so ...
帮我看看下面这段话有什么语法错误或者其它不好的,很短的
答：第四行的最后一个单词应该是confidence.第五行most的M要大写 第六行to be dressed 第六行we的W要大写 第六行pieces of colorful paper 第七行as far as的第一个as的A要大写 第七行As far as I known 第七行we had cut the withered petals，但前面用as far as来连接好像怪怪的，意思表达不...
改后:
develope后面应该不直接跟形容词吧
第二句中间的分句没有连接词
benefit和后面的一些行为这样写 有些别扭
The vast resource on the computer 这里的资源应该写是在互联网上比较好
knowledge 一般不跟study搭配
修改入下
Nowadays, modern technology has become more and more sophisticated that brings a lot of convenience to our daily life. For instance, if you want to send a letter to your friend, you don’t have to go to the post office to send the letter. You just click the send button on the computer,and your friend will receive it immediately. In addition, There are amount of benefits of the internet. We can do shopping, read books, watch movies, chat with friends or family and so on. The vast resource on the internet gives us an opportunity to get knowledge on all kinds of subjects that we can't learn in the class.
who share the same interest with me
such as pizza......
music is another reasons which attracts
I love staying with my friends and we enjoy talking about new movies and all funny things happened during the week
That is the most wonderful moment in my daily life(但是你前面说一个星期里的趣事，但是如果这里说daily life，意思就是你每天都会来这里，那就不是一个星期里的趣事了)
That place provides.... for releasing pressures from work and study
其实有些也不能说是错，只是也许这样说会好一些
希望楼主找到自己喜欢的表达方式
按前后顺序： same 前加the；there is因为food不可数；reason 和attracts中间加that，不可省的，因为在从句中做主语…同时go前加to；staying那句就特别错喽………建议改成staying with them spares us time to talk about the things that happens in a week.地道些～；provide加s………总结下，楼主要注意时态哟！尤其是单三的变化哦！加油
答：2.may be can用的不对，be 和can都是动词，应该为 A good poem may change one’s whole life in a short time.3.I couldn’t help loving this poem because within such single words can tell the essence of life.can tell the essence of life前缺少主语，应该为I couldn’t help lov...
答：I love staying with my friends and we enjoy talking about new movies and all funny things happened during the week That is the most wonderful moment in my daily life(但是你前面说一个星期里的趣事，但是如果这里说daily life，意思就是你每天都会来这里，那就不是一个星期里的趣事了)Tha...
答：真的，语法错误不是一点点，你应该好好补补了。最关键的是一个句子只有一个谓语你知道吗？I accept the truth is that I must face the problems will be probably happened in the future study. I really felt my English is much more better than before。句子而且都很生硬，完全是汉语式英语...
答：This book (is) just a simple diary about （a）man. What attacts me there（可去掉） is the author's spirit of dedication and pursuit about(改为of) dreams. A man faces thousands of difficulities in(去掉in) every day. Each problem could drive one person（可去掉）to despire（...
答：第1段，第1行：that后缺动词，建议改成 ... that there is a flame with smile ... ；去掉And，there is 改成 There is also ... ；word 改成 phrase ；第2行：... flame that ... 改成 ... flame says that ... ；第3行：warm 改成名词 warmth ；who 引导的从句挪到 people ...
答：1。China Ren Min University 2. And my job is senior clerk 3. I wen to the CIQ to assistant their work, from 2008 to 2013 4. I used to work in GHS billing office at 2009. 5. I am a careful person, and I love to learn.6. I cooperate well with my colleagues, and ...
答：很纯粹的汉语机器翻译。语法存在较大问题：修改如下：Now I have seen that it is so difficult to forget you again that I have to avoid bringing everything about you in mind .I don`t know how long the things in my mind will last ,but just know I miss you so muchat the ...
答：In one word有错。总之是in a word vegetables and fruits has less fat 有错。是have。另外，dieting是节食。节食就一定是不吃肉吗 hypertension and coronary heart disease and so on 不要and so on keep healthy 不是health hit two birds with one stone,isn’t it? 我觉得有点怪。isn't...
答：典型中国英语，语法错很多。没有耐性看的话会晕死。请多读地道英文书，多练笔。I have three hometowns，because my father was born in He nan, my mother was born in He bei province, I was born in Tingjing, my father works in (Xi'an)XA. I moved there three years ago。so ...
答：第四行的最后一个单词应该是confidence.第五行most的M要大写 第六行to be dressed 第六行we的W要大写 第六行pieces of colorful paper 第七行as far as的第一个as的A要大写 第七行As far as I known 第七行we had cut the withered petals，但前面用as far as来连接好像怪怪的，意思表达不...
