英文语法有没有错误?急用！麻烦帮忙一下！
标题可以写 my daily life in the campus
把动词都改为一般时，不需要ing形式， 因为这是你每天都都做的 ，
eat , read book etc
洗澡 可以用 have/take a shower 表达
购物 可以只说 go shopping
多读书， 珍惜校园时光
Dear Mr. Wang,
I have been in Designs& Fashions for two month. Generally speaking, I am glad that I am allowed to work here. My workmates are very friendly and the surroundings are quite pleasant. However,for some personal reasons I have to quit now. I would like to express my greatest appreciation if you could so kindly to accept my decision.
Firstly, I am poor in my health. Yet the job as an editor is so busy that I do not have enough time to have a good rest. Moreover, the distance from my house to company is just too far. I would have to spend 2 hours on bus every day. It makes me feel very tired after reaching my office.
Please accept my sincere apology. I hope you could take my request into consideration. I am looking forward to your early reply.
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
"on your way home late at night。 You should walk the street which have a large pepple. You msut alert suspect people who have follow up you come back home. "
更正如下:
"If you go home late at night, you should walk on the streets where there are many (a lot of) people. You must also be on that alert that there were no suspicious characters tailing you from behind."
注:
(a) walk the street =walk on the road/street;
(b) a large people = many (a lot of) people
(c) alert = on the alert/ must be alert...
(d) suspect = suspicious (characters)
(e) follow up = tailing you /following you from behind...
不要late，还有pepple是people~msut是must~
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