请高手帮我修改下这篇英语作文，是否有语法和句式错误
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请帮忙批改这篇英语作文！找出语法错误句式错误！
2. more faster and comfortable 中faster已经是比较级了，所以不能加more而应该加much，comfortable是多音节词因此比较级加more是对的。因此应改为much faster and more comfortable
3.would like to do所以应改为But I'd like to ride a bike.
4.好像现在分词短语不能作句子（只有在生活英语或口语中才会用的）所以For example,riding a bike, driving a car,walking and so on.这个句子你可以改一下，加上谓语和（宾语)或者加上系表结构。
希望你满意哦~
I'd like to 后加动词原形
most of people -> "most people" or "most of the people"
more faster-> faster
Although I tend to feel tired easily, biking can help us keep fit.
they think driving a car is faster and more comfortable
but I'd like to ride a bike
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改后：
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1.most of people应该为most people 或者 most of the people2. more faster and comfortable 中faster已经是比较级了，所以不能加more而应该加much，comfortable是多音节词因此比较级加more是对的。因此应改为much faster and more comfortable
3.would like to do所以应改为But I'd like to ride a bike.
4.好像现在分词短语不能作句子（只有在生活英语或口语中才会用的）所以For example,riding a bike, driving a car,walking and so on.这个句子你可以改一下，加上谓语和（宾语)或者加上系表结构。
希望你满意哦~
I'd like to 后加动词原形
most of people -> "most people" or "most of the people"
more faster-> faster
Although I tend to feel tired easily, biking can help us keep fit.
they think driving a car is faster and more comfortable
but I'd like to ride a bike
答：请注意冠词的用法，如果名词前没有冠词的话，必须把可数名词换成复数形式 比如：use a computer;use computers;use the computer;use thecomputers 唯独不能说use computer 引用【冠词是一种虚词，是最典型的限定词，本身不能单独使用，只能附在一个名词上帮助说明名词的含义。是名词的一种标志。英语中...
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答：Zuo Zongtang, Cai E and so on.I will never forget the day of June 25, 2007 when I graduated from Hunan University. If there is a chance， I will go back to my Alma Master, visit my teachers and have a good view of Yuelu Mountain again.我觉得你写的还不错蛤 ...
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