大师,帮我看下这个中译英有哪些语法错误呢? 能否给个更标准的翻译呢?
主要是时态 有问题
楼上的 回答 可以参考
不过 应该 用一般过去时 特别是最后一句 即 I onced worked for 2 years in a US company in China, one of the Word Top 500 Enterprises.
Time is important .Everyone has 24 hours in a day ,and 365 days in a year. Once a day runs out in our life,it will never come back again.If we love our lives,we shouldn't waste time.we must control time.The best way to use time is to plan it well.
When making the study plan,we should remember two things .First ,be realistic.Don't try to do 〈too many things 〉「改:anything」.Second ,a good study plan should be flexible .We may make some small changes,but follow the same pattern.
Let's be the master of time ,start our plan now. 说实在,这是一篇不错的文章
中文语法也有错。喜欢就是喜欢,没有有时喜欢,有时不喜欢的说法。
中文修改:我最大优点是我是个热心肠和外向的女孩。有时我读报纸,当得知某人身患重病或者缺钱读书时,我会尽自己大努力帮助他们,我不仅自己捐款给他们,我也号召身边的朋友一起帮助他们。帮助别人已经逐渐成为我的生活习惯。闲暇时间,我喜欢旅游、打羽毛球及与朋友聊天。定期锻炼不仅带给我健康的身体,也带给我充沛的活力和乐观的心态
My greatest merit is I am a warm-hearted and outgoing girl. Sometimes I like reading the newspaper. And when I know that someone is suffering from serious illness or lack of money to go to school, I will do my best to donate and appeal my friends to attend this activity. Helping others is not only meaningful, it could also gradually turn into my living habit. In myspare time, I like traveling, playing badminton and communicating with friends. Regular exercises keep me in good health, and full of energy and optimism.
稍微改了一点点,其他还都挺好的~
高一的英文水平吧,但还看得懂。不需要改什么。
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