请贵人帮我检查一下英语语法！急！！！
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Solitude-spending time alone-necessary’s working （这是什么，你想表达什么）is an attitude which you should use it（it 多余） to face your life. Nothing will distract you when you stay alone to improve working efficiency to reach your goal and also（also放在can后） you can develop your independent skill（skills） at the same time.
In this colorful urban life, gossiping and chatting are the things people do out of necessity after work, dinner and etc. They even always （always不要）can’t help themselves（themselves删掉） doing such( a thing as sneak chatting）注意这里when they are at their office, . However, (by) spending time along(alone) to finish your project(,) you will (will you ) find something become(s) efficient magically. Sitting in front of me, who just cut his hair in a preposterous way, is my classmate called Billy. Recently, I(have) found that he started to vanish (disappear)at night, maybe chatting with a hot chick. Following him, I found that he stayed alone studying, which seemed like nobody can distract him until the end of the world (approaches). From then on, we can see the(the删掉) Billy’s improvement and at the last semester, Billy got ideal marks which are much better than before. For this, we can know how he becomes strong at study in order to achieve his goal. Staying alone, （and）spending time to let yourself clam（calm） down, which can protect you from noisy sound, is the best way to make your dream come true.
On the other hand, you will have your own opinion on(in) solving problem （s）and improving independent skills, if you spending(ing去掉) time alone. Loneliness, which can show you the way to success, is not a terrible thing. Taking Helen Adams Keller as a powerful instance, this incredible lady is the poorest and happiest person in the world because of her blind(ness), deaf and her unparalleled success. When she was 19 months old baby(baby去掉), she lost the key to observe world and enjoy the sounds coming form nature. However, she never gives(gave) up, facing this awful（ly） realistic situation alone, finishing her studies, becoming a well known celebrity, learning how to be strengthen (strong)when she is(was) in trouble and overcoming(overcame) these arduous things alone. (这一长句，你为什么老用ing形式，)She caught her goal with a special thinking of life and her own way to figure out problems. We don’t have the same situation as Helen, but we can learn something for creating（to improve our） your own ability, (.)spending time alone, to (can )help you develop your independent skills in a particular way and also find your deficiency.
Not only you can(not only) enhance your efficiency but also develop your own skill, if you are solitude on doing something. This will make you feel closer and closer to your important goal. And the only thing you should do is staying alone, concentrating, getting rid of the deterrent on your way to success.
下面是我翻译的这几个句子，可能感觉会更好一些，供你参考:-)
Is this the first time you come to Starbucks?
请问你是第一次来星巴克喝咖啡吗？
What attracts you to come into starbucks?
你觉得星巴克有什么地方吸引您走进来？
Do you think the service of each Starbucks' outlet consistent?
对于星巴克个分店的服务，你觉得很一致吗？
After ordering your coffee, the waiter/waitress would repeat its Italian name to another one. What's your feeling for this flow of service?
在你点完咖啡，服务员都会以意大利语在重复一次你点的咖啡给另一位服务人员，这样的服务流程给你什么感受？
How do you like the mark cup for coffee in Starbuck?
星巴克以马克杯装咖啡，你的感受如何呢？
Have you noticed the decoration inside Starbucks? How does it impress you?
请问你曾经注意过星巴克店内的装潢吗？ 他给你怎样的感觉？
Have you noticed the colors in Starbucks? What's your feeling for this color combination?
请问你曾经注意过星巴克店内的颜色吗？这样的颜色组合给你怎样的感觉？
Do you like the Starbucks' music? What sensation do you get from it?
你喜欢星巴克的音乐吗？她带给你怎样的感觉？
Have you noticed the Starbucks' trademark? What's your feeling for that?
请问你注意过星巴克的商标吗？他给你怎样的感觉？
Have you ever sat in sofa of Starbucks? Why do you want to sit there and how do you feel?
对于星巴克店内的沙发椅，你曾经去坐过吗？为什么会想去坐呢？她带给你怎样的感觉呢？
11. How do you think the cupboard which use to display the sucker and other goods? How does it impress you?
你觉得星巴克店内摆放的吸管等物品的备品柜，带给你什么样的感觉？
12. After coming into Starbucks, have you ever noticed the scent inside Starbucks? What is your feeling for that?
在你进入店内时，你是否曾注意到星巴克店内的气味吗？带给你怎样的感觉呢？
13. Do you have any special feelings when you use the bathroom/rest room of Starbucks?
对于星巴克的洗手间，你在使用时又没有什么特别的感觉呢？
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