我是一名初一学生，请各位大神帮吗看一下这三篇英语作文
1、As
a
jurnior
middle
school
student
(高中生的话，把"jurnior"换成“senior”就行)
who
is
also
a
member
of
Young
Pioneer,
I
have
a
stronge
faith
that
it
is
more
meanful
and
valuable
to
keep
concentrations
on
the
studies
and
to
exhaut
all
the
energies
for
distinguished
grades,
rather
than
to
pursuit
the
enjoyments
of
fashional
clothes
and
of
luxury
diets.
Moreover,
regardless
of
the
considerable
number
of
the
terms
for
our
school
motto,
including
"Every
student
should
help
their
mates
and
must
keep
an
attitude
of
learning
to
their
peers.",
for
my
part,
some
appropriate
modifications
are
necessary.
For
example,
the
students
should
have
the
free
time
for
their
own
hobbies
and
should
acqiuire
the
freedom
for
friends
making
and
entertainments,
while
the
permissions
for
potentially
dangerous
things
like
driving
must
be
dinned.
2、Thanks
for
your
reply
e-mail.
I
am
sorry
for
the
anger
from
your
friend,
Wu
(或者写作
Dong
WU，这个姓一定要全大写)
to
you。For
my
part,
to
be
angery
with
you
because
of
your
refusing
to
playing
computer
game
together
is
irreasonable,
or
even
ridiculous.
If
you
want
to
save
this
friendship,
you
could
have
a
talk
with
him
and
tell
him
two
main
points.
one
is
that
behaviiours
like
being
later
or
even
beiing
abusent
for
times
could
be
astray
for
a
student,
Another
point
is
the
importance
of
studying
well.
As
students,
we
should
pay
more
attention
on
the
cources
and
units
rather
than
computer
games.
Finally,
take
the
things
easily.
You
will
handle
this
and
he
will
understand
you,
I
believe
so.
3、鉴于细节上的问题(例如，英文中男女钱包根本就不是一个词)所以在下实在爱莫能助。如果需要强行进行翻译的话，请追问，明天中午1200时(悉尼时间，对等于北京时间0900)之前给你翻译好
1.She can will do very delicious meal典型错句子，用了can就行了will就别再用了，注意句子结构，，还有做饭用cook应该更好些，不知道你们学了没有，用do感觉搭配不是很好。
2.She love。。love应该加s，第三人称单数，初中的考点，多注意下。And I have a brother 有点多余，前面不是已经说了。In any day换成I can see he playing computer game everyday，是不是更好些。都是细节问题，初次学外语多备些东西就能写好了。
My room is a small one. There is a desk,a bed and a wardrobe. I have lots of books, they are in the bookshelf of the desk. Under the bed, I have two cabinets. All my toys are in these cabinets.
This is my room. What about you?
Lost:My book
I lost my book. The book is green and topic of the book is Survive. I’m very sad, because the book is the homework of winter vacation. I must find it. If you find it, please call me. My telephone number is 123456789. Thank you for your help.
×××
Found: At school
I found a green schoolbag. The schoolbag is small. There is a pencil and a book in the schoolbag. The pencil is green and the book is green too. If these things are yours,you can call me at 12346789.
×××
小同学，三篇文章写的总体很好！ 思路很清晰，就是有个别小问题，我已经在不破坏原意的基础上改正了！
语法点： there be 句型后如果跟两个或两个以上的名词短语，遵循就近原则。
e.g. There are three apples,one orange and two bananas.
There is one orange,three apples and two bananas.
每个人都有自己的房间，我也有一个。现在，让我告诉你关于我的房间吧。
我的房间是比较小的。这里有一张桌子、一张床和一个衣柜。我有许多书，他们在我桌子上的书架里。在床底下，我有两个小盒子（这个单词我不确定）我所有的玩具都在这些小盒子里。
这是我的房间，你的呢？
这是第一段的翻译（我看错提了），这写作文总的来说写的不错，不过There are a pencil and a book in the schoolbag. 把There are改成There is就对啦
让干什么？
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