各位英语高手们帮我看下我的一篇8级写作 谢谢各位 欢迎提出各种建议
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急需一份英语演讲稿"What makes a good English teacher",限时三分钟,希望各位英语高手们帮忙一下,谢谢了
when ，，，你是不是想when后面省略主语谓语，主语和主句保持一致？ 这个好像不太对吧，when后面的主语应该是人 人被问，而不是意见观点被问。 the opinions varies 主谓不一致，最好不用the
Lots of people think that only those who can earn a lot of money are talented people, while others hold that a talent person is the one who is able to contribute a lot to the society ,command a essential skill, have a strong spirit to return the society.
earn a lot of money 不错 但是有没有觉得稍显累赘？直接earn a lot 会更好 a talent person talent形式不对 talented essential前面应该是an a spirit？怪怪的。 回报回馈社会 地道的应该用feedback
Obviously, the latter one I agree on. 句子顺序？？？正常语序才对 想强调的话可以说 I do agree，，，
To make my ideas clearly, 你的idea只有一个 就是同意后者 那个观点 应该是idea 还有应该用clear
there are three specific arguments in the following. Firstly, it is essential to a talented person to command a specialization that is applied in society. With the society developing fast, many fields of work need all walks of talent people.
all walks ？？？？？？of talent people
Therefore, whatever skills a person can command is definitely needed in society.
are
The reason is simple because all of them can contribute their efforts to the society.
that
In other words, they not only help the society but also service the people. Next, as a talented
加上 do serve 去掉the
person, he or she should have a strong adaptability to the society that is changeable all the
去掉a changing changable是可变的 你要表达的意思是变化着的
time. Once a person enter the society, he or she will touch many fresh things such as new
enters
colleagues, colleague 和people相似
different working environment and so on. different后面应该加复数吧
There is no doubt that it is important to them to learn how to integrate into such a new environment so that they can adapt to the society quickly and contribute to the society.
important后面加for比较好 而不是to
Last but not least, a talented person must have a strong spirit to return the society and service people. 前面说过了 稍显啰嗦。
Our nation spend much time and money in nurturing us, which offer us good conditions to
要么去掉 要么改成on offers which代表的是nation
study. In order to help us attain more useful knowledge, the educational revolution is always been done from time to time. 这句话考试的时候会扣你很多分的 应该是has always。。。
Therefore, as a member of this country, all of us should have a heated mind to return our nation. feedback
From what has been discussed above, the definition for a modern talented person is obvious . A talented person ought to command a useful skill, have a strong adaptability and spirit to return the society. 能力是不可数的 a 不对 前面也有这样的情况
呵呵 纯属个人意见 一块研究下 请见谅
英语高手们...帮帮我写一篇英语作文
答：I go to school.I always do my homework after I have lunch.In the evening,after having super,I go to do my homework,after that,sometimes I read books,sometimes I watch TV,sometimes I play computer.This is my life in a day,and I feel happy .我很认真写的哦.给我哈1`...
我是自学英语的新手写了一篇的自我介绍,请高手们帮忙看下有没有时态标 ...
答：with two others, they may serve me as my teachers.我看了下，一些最基本的符号和短语已经帮您更正过来了，目前您的水平还是可以的，基本上能够表达出您的思想，但是，如果需要更准确更透彻地掌握英语您需要加倍努力。如果有时间的话，推荐您学习新概念英语。加油！祝您早日在英语上突破自己！
各位英语高手们,帮帮忙啊,帮忙翻译一篇文章,要有语法的,很急很急的...
答：The movie is one kind of wonderful thing, it has created another world, a fill time is filling pleasantly surprised, fills the mysterious world.The animal also may speak in this world, the animal may sing, the animal may dance, it can let the time flow backwards, lets the ...
急!!!请各位英语高手们帮我翻译一下这篇英语短文,在线等!!!谢谢了...
答：拥有幽默感能让你健康，快乐，因为幽默总能让你斗志高昂，在心理和身理都对你的健康有好处。拥有幽默感便改变了你眼前的整个世界的色彩。当你有幽默感时，你也能交到很多的朋友。人们跟你在一起都会感到很开心，因为你可以帮助他们以完全不同的角度和更开阔的视野看待事物。你给了人们力量去面对这...
英语专八,麻烦高手们都来推荐一下好的复习资料,谢谢了咯!
答：陆续送往各高校,下面我们来看看中华英语学习网的学员的过级经验,希望对备战2010年专八的同学有所帮助!...我想对无论是一战还是二战通过八级的同学们说,你们都是自己的英雄(买答案的同学就靠边站吧,我的这些...刚开始练习的时候最多不要超过10分钟一篇,最好一次做俩篇,这样的话,强度不算太大,一般的同学都能够...
请各位英语高手们帮我翻译一篇文章~汉译英~很急的~``感激不尽
答：Some mummy has suddenly vanished from the museum, the people felt verystrangely, all news and the newspaper have all reported this matterSome rumors said was the mummy has late received work in some, thenhas escaped the museum, but also some people said was some peoplestole away ...
英语高手们!帮我修改一下作文
答：The cultural difference between China and the western countries Everyone knows that there are lots of cultural differences between China and the western countries.Such as values ， single standard, social etiquette, and so on .for example ,in china when we meet a acquaintance in the ...
请英语高手们进!!! 帮我看看怎么做哦~
答：2
高手们,帮忙看下英语阅读,感激不尽!!!
答：3-week 5-first 6-cloud 7-different 8-lot 10-beautiful 我的能力有限，现在只能肯定这么多，其他的不太肯定。10也不是很肯定。
...我没有用三单形式。请各位高手们帮我看看我的英语作文
答：回答：这个太不清了,这篇文章时态不对,第四行,刷牙的表达方式不对,第五行,他很快的快在系动词后应该用形容词,不过总体来说要表达的内容还是比较清晰的,小学生水平也算很好的了,希望你继续努力哦!
I was very lucky to have met many good teachers,among whom the most mpressive one is my English teacher.She is a woman of midiumheight.She is in her thirties,wearing glasses,and a little on the thin side.Her name is Nancy.
I regard Nancy as a good teacher for three main reasons.To start with,Nancy's dedication and enthusiasm to her work inspired me to get ahead and never stop trying.She spent a lot of her spare time talking with us,helping us with prombles in study and personal life.Second,the wonderfully creative lessons she delivered make English learning no longer a hard job but full of fun.I enjoy every minute of her lesson.And third,Nancy's warmly human character creates a bond of friendship that will last forever.Her great sense of humor and encouraging words made us close to each other like friends.
我体会你这种爱的感觉, 感觉很强, 很特别, 很新。您给我幸福礼物每天, 从未有I 已知它能是这样。你给了您的爱不管费用, 以我的心在你的关心, 我从未将丢失。或从未再奇迹什么爱真正地意味, 我暂时知道它意味许多事。了解和关心, 通过好时期和坏, 分享情感, 如果他们是愉快或哀伤的。是那里为彼此通过笑声或泪花, 在彼此的边为剩余我们的岁月。我唯一愿望将是以您, 我的爱, 对我祈祷对天堂上面的□天。您总记住我的感觉为您。感觉很强, 很特别, 很新!
Nowadays, when asked about the definition for a talented person in Modern Society, the opinions varies from person to person.when ，，，你是不是想when后面省略主语谓语，主语和主句保持一致？ 这个好像不太对吧，when后面的主语应该是人 人被问，而不是意见观点被问。 the opinions varies 主谓不一致，最好不用the
Lots of people think that only those who can earn a lot of money are talented people, while others hold that a talent person is the one who is able to contribute a lot to the society ,command a essential skill, have a strong spirit to return the society.
earn a lot of money 不错 但是有没有觉得稍显累赘？直接earn a lot 会更好 a talent person talent形式不对 talented essential前面应该是an a spirit？怪怪的。 回报回馈社会 地道的应该用feedback
Obviously, the latter one I agree on. 句子顺序？？？正常语序才对 想强调的话可以说 I do agree，，，
To make my ideas clearly, 你的idea只有一个 就是同意后者 那个观点 应该是idea 还有应该用clear
there are three specific arguments in the following. Firstly, it is essential to a talented person to command a specialization that is applied in society. With the society developing fast, many fields of work need all walks of talent people.
all walks ？？？？？？of talent people
Therefore, whatever skills a person can command is definitely needed in society.
are
The reason is simple because all of them can contribute their efforts to the society.
that
In other words, they not only help the society but also service the people. Next, as a talented
加上 do serve 去掉the
person, he or she should have a strong adaptability to the society that is changeable all the
去掉a changing changable是可变的 你要表达的意思是变化着的
time. Once a person enter the society, he or she will touch many fresh things such as new
enters
colleagues, colleague 和people相似
different working environment and so on. different后面应该加复数吧
There is no doubt that it is important to them to learn how to integrate into such a new environment so that they can adapt to the society quickly and contribute to the society.
important后面加for比较好 而不是to
Last but not least, a talented person must have a strong spirit to return the society and service people. 前面说过了 稍显啰嗦。
Our nation spend much time and money in nurturing us, which offer us good conditions to
要么去掉 要么改成on offers which代表的是nation
study. In order to help us attain more useful knowledge, the educational revolution is always been done from time to time. 这句话考试的时候会扣你很多分的 应该是has always。。。
Therefore, as a member of this country, all of us should have a heated mind to return our nation. feedback
From what has been discussed above, the definition for a modern talented person is obvious . A talented person ought to command a useful skill, have a strong adaptability and spirit to return the society. 能力是不可数的 a 不对 前面也有这样的情况
呵呵 纯属个人意见 一块研究下 请见谅
答：I go to school.I always do my homework after I have lunch.In the evening,after having super,I go to do my homework,after that,sometimes I read books,sometimes I watch TV,sometimes I play computer.This is my life in a day,and I feel happy .我很认真写的哦.给我哈1`...
答：with two others, they may serve me as my teachers.我看了下，一些最基本的符号和短语已经帮您更正过来了，目前您的水平还是可以的，基本上能够表达出您的思想，但是，如果需要更准确更透彻地掌握英语您需要加倍努力。如果有时间的话，推荐您学习新概念英语。加油！祝您早日在英语上突破自己！
答：The movie is one kind of wonderful thing, it has created another world, a fill time is filling pleasantly surprised, fills the mysterious world.The animal also may speak in this world, the animal may sing, the animal may dance, it can let the time flow backwards, lets the ...
答：拥有幽默感能让你健康，快乐，因为幽默总能让你斗志高昂，在心理和身理都对你的健康有好处。拥有幽默感便改变了你眼前的整个世界的色彩。当你有幽默感时，你也能交到很多的朋友。人们跟你在一起都会感到很开心，因为你可以帮助他们以完全不同的角度和更开阔的视野看待事物。你给了人们力量去面对这...
答：陆续送往各高校,下面我们来看看中华英语学习网的学员的过级经验,希望对备战2010年专八的同学有所帮助!...我想对无论是一战还是二战通过八级的同学们说,你们都是自己的英雄(买答案的同学就靠边站吧,我的这些...刚开始练习的时候最多不要超过10分钟一篇,最好一次做俩篇,这样的话,强度不算太大,一般的同学都能够...
答：Some mummy has suddenly vanished from the museum, the people felt verystrangely, all news and the newspaper have all reported this matterSome rumors said was the mummy has late received work in some, thenhas escaped the museum, but also some people said was some peoplestole away ...
答：The cultural difference between China and the western countries Everyone knows that there are lots of cultural differences between China and the western countries.Such as values ， single standard, social etiquette, and so on .for example ,in china when we meet a acquaintance in the ...
答：2
答：3-week 5-first 6-cloud 7-different 8-lot 10-beautiful 我的能力有限，现在只能肯定这么多，其他的不太肯定。10也不是很肯定。
答：回答：这个太不清了,这篇文章时态不对,第四行,刷牙的表达方式不对,第五行,他很快的快在系动词后应该用形容词,不过总体来说要表达的内容还是比较清晰的,小学生水平也算很好的了,希望你继续努力哦!
