请帮忙核对下有无语法错误。

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核对 是否有语法错误

My suggestion: We cannot but do this quietly for which I wonder whether it can contribute to the expectation that the slience can refrain us from hurting each other or not.

invitationletter 这应该是两个单词,讲invitation和letter 分开

Nowadays, (不用逗号)in people's daily life, bad(改为unhealthy) diet custom(社会、种族、民族的长期的行为习惯用custom,个人的习惯用habit) and lacks (不可数)of exercise, in addition to(该短语用来表示除了什么之外引出更重要的内容) weight neglect(用名词才对) of themselves, so(前面主句不完整) obesity become(单数动词) a hidden danger(用threat) to people(所有的人?抽象的人?应该是对某些人而言如此), therefore the purpose of this electronic body scale is facilitates(用带to的不定式) the people while weigh weight(表达欠妥), use weight sensing and fixed position sensing through the AD transform and simulate(?) data, with the processor operate and judge(with引导的短语不能用动词原型), then obtained(主语呢?) whether(也没有主语) surpassed the standard body weight.
到这出现第一个句号,前面这个长句结构存在不少问题,语言表达问题也较多。后面的不一一指出了。
At the last, it display the results(改用statistics数据为好) through(显示在液晶屏幕上用on) LCD. At this time the users are be able to have an certain understanding of their weight healthy. This paper propose an Electronic body scale using embedded technical(你是想说“该产品使用了….技术”吧?) with the S3C44BOX ARM Ship(应该是chip吧?) which is the product of Samsung company.
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Nowadays unhealthy diet habits and lack of exercise in daily life accompanied by negligence of weight lead to many people's obesity, which poses a hidden threat to their health. The purpose of this electronic body scale is to facilitate body weighing by using weight sensing through AD transformation and data simulation. After calculation and evaluation, the processor will display all relevant statistics on the LCD to show if the user has exceeded standard weight, thus acquainting him with his health status.
This paper introduces the electronic body scale embedded with the S3C44BOX ARM Ship which is a product of Samsung technology. Nowadays, (不用逗号)in people's daily life, bad(改为unhealthy) diet custom(社会、种族、民族的长期的行为习惯用custom,个人的习惯用habit) and lacks (不可数)of exercise, in addition to(该短语用来表示除了什么之外引出更重要的内容) weight neglect(用名词才对) of themselves, so(前面主句不完整) obesity become(单数动词) a hidden danger(用threat) to people(所有的人?抽象的人?应该是对某些人而言如此), therefore the purpose of this electronic body scale is facilitates(用带to的不定式) the people while weigh weight(表达欠妥), use weight sensing and fixed position sensing through the AD transform and simulate(?) data, with the processor operate and judge(with引导的短语不能用动词原型), then obtained(主语呢?) whether(也没有主语) surpassed the standard body weight.
到这出现第一个句号,前面这个长句结构存在不少问题,语言表达问题也较多。后面的不一一指出了。
At the last, it display the results(改用statistics数据为好) through(显示在液晶屏幕上用on) LCD. At this time the users are be able to have an certain understanding of their weight healthy. This paper propose an Electronic body scale using embedded technical(你是想说“该产品使用了….技术”吧?) with the S3C44BOX ARM Ship(应该是chip吧?) which is the product of Samsung company.
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Nowadays unhealthy diet habits and lack of exercise in daily life accompanied by negligence of weight lead to many people's obesity, which poses a hidden threat to their health. The purpose of this electronic body scale is to facilitate body weighing by using weight sensing through AD transformation and data simulation. After calculation and evaluation, the processor will display all relevant statistics on the LCD to show if the user has exceeded standard weight, thus acquainting him with his health status.
This paper introduces the electronic body scale embedded with the S3C44BOX ARM Ship which is a product of Samsung technology.

Nowadays, (不用逗号)in people's daily life, bad(改为unhealthy) diet custom(社会、种族、民族的长期的行为习惯用custom,个人的习惯用habit) and lacks (不可数)of exercise, in addition to(该短语用来表示除了什么之外引出更重要的内容) weight neglect(用名词才对) of themselves, so(前面主句不完整) obesity become(单数动词) a hidden danger(用threat) to people(所有的人?抽象的人?应该是对某些人而言如此), therefore the purpose of this electronic body scale is facilitates(用带to的不定式) the people while weigh weight(表达欠妥), use weight sensing and fixed position sensing through the AD transform and simulate(?) data, with the processor operate and judge(with引导的短语不能用动词原型), then obtained(主语呢?) whether(也没有主语) surpassed the standard body weight.
到这出现第一个句号,前面这个长句结构存在不少问题,语言表达问题也较多。后面的不一一指出了。
At the last, it display the results(改用statistics数据为好) through(显示在液晶屏幕上用on) LCD. At this time the users are be able to have an certain understanding of their weight healthy. This paper propose an Electronic body scale using embedded technical(你是想说“该产品使用了….技术”吧?) with the S3C44BOX ARM Ship(应该是chip吧?) which is the product of Samsung company.
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Nowadays unhealthy diet habits and lack of exercise in daily life accompanied by negligence of weight lead to many people's obesity, which poses a hidden threat to their health. The purpose of this electronic body scale is to facilitate body weighing by using weight sensing through AD transformation and data simulation. After calculation and evaluation, the processor will display all relevant statistics on the LCD to show if the user has exceeded standard weight, thus acquainting him with his health status.
This paper introduces the electronic body scale embedded with the S3C44BOX ARM Ship which is a product of Samsung technology.

如此抄袭!厚颜无耻!!!---
他们是:
萧萧雪☆ - 见习魔法师 二级
紫色天使的爱恋 - 见习魔法师 二级
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先修改并简单说明如下:
Nowadays, (不用逗号)in people's daily life, bad(改为unhealthy) diet custom(社会、种族、民族的长期的行为习惯用custom,个人的习惯用habit) and lacks (不可数)of exercise, in addition to(该短语用来表示除了什么之外引出更重要的内容) weight neglect(用名词才对) of themselves, so(前面主句不完整) obesity become(单数动词) a hidden danger(用threat) to people(所有的人?抽象的人?应该是对某些人而言如此), therefore the purpose of this electronic body scale is facilitates(用带to的不定式) the people while weigh weight(表达欠妥), use weight sensing and fixed position sensing through the AD transform and simulate(?) data, with the processor operate and judge(with引导的短语不能用动词原型), then obtained(主语呢?) whether(也没有主语) surpassed the standard body weight.
到这出现第一个句号,前面这个长句结构存在不少问题,语言表达问题也较多。后面的不一一指出了。
At the last, it display the results(改用statistics数据为好) through(显示在液晶屏幕上用on) LCD. At this time the users are be able to have an certain understanding of their weight healthy. This paper propose an Electronic body scale using embedded technical(你是想说“该产品使用了….技术”吧?) with the S3C44BOX ARM Ship(应该是chip吧?) which is the product of Samsung company.
___________________
Nowadays unhealthy diet habits and lack of exercise in daily life accompanied by negligence of weight lead to many people's obesity, which poses a hidden threat to their health. The purpose of this electronic body scale is to facilitate body weighing by using weight sensing through AD transformation and data simulation. After calculation and evaluation, the processor will display all relevant statistics on the LCD to show if the user has exceeded standard weight, thus acquainting him with his health status.
This paper introduces the electronic body scale embedded with the S3C44BOX ARM Ship which is a product of Samsung technology.

如果都这样的话谁还来帮助他人翻译?

Nowadays, in people's daily life, bad diet custom and lacks of exercise,
diet - dieting, lacks - lack
in addition to weight neglect of themselves,
"not watching their own weight"更通顺
so obesity become a hidden danger to people,
以上文构造, 这里得把so变为caused
therefore the purpose of this electronic body scale is facilitates the people while weigh weight,
这里得全该
use weight sensing and fixed position sensing through the AD transform and simulate data,
use - using
with the processor operate and judge,
operate - operation judge - monitoring 这句得看原文才能完全修改, 不过先修改语法错误
then obtained whether surpassed the standard body weight.
得全改
At the last, it display the results through LCD.
还没到最后一点,所以At the last改为furthermore
At this time the users are be able to have an certain understanding of their weight healthy.
得全改
This paper propose an Electronic body scale using embedded technical with the S3C44BOX ARM Ship which is the product of Samsung company.
propse - introduce technical - technology Ship - Chip???

修改后的结果, 文章应通顺了。 语法错误基本消除.
Nowadays, in people's daily life, bad dieting customs, lack of exercise, in addition to not watching their own weight, caused obesity to become a hidden danger to people. Therefore, the purpose of this electronic body scale is to make weighing a easier process for people. Using weight sensing and fixed position sensing through the AD transform and simulation data, along with processor controlled operation and monitoring, this scale can determine whether the person using it has surpassed the standard body weight. Furthermore, the scale displays the results through a LCD. At this time the users will be able to obtain some knowledge regarding their healthiness. This paper introduces an Electronic body scale made with embedded technology using the S3C44BOX ARM Chip, a product of the Samsung company.

上面的“一问啥不知”先生,你攻击了那么多人,可是你自己翻译的也不怎么样啊!我觉得一个键客不该如此攻击他人的“软件翻译”什么的,因为“来者是客”,任何一个回答者都是楼主的朋友,无论能力如何都算献出了自己的一份努力,你在这方面表现还是比较典型的,攻击我的也就算了,可是千万别跟试用期的过不去啊!人家水平是比较低,但是这不够构成外语版面为某些高手独家垄断的理由吧?我已经注意好多次了没有说你。
这道题快过期了,我来看看吧!错误还是很多的,你没有提供原始汉语文献,对照起来比较困难,但是还是完成了,希望你仔细看看,不要等到问题完全过期也不来处理。
Nowadays, obesity becomes a potential danger to people in their daily lives for their bad diet custom, lack of exercise, as well as the neglect of their body weight. Therefore, the objective of this electronic body scale is to help people weigh their weight by using weight sensors and fixed position sensors through AD transformation and data simulation with the operation and judgment of the processor. Thus people know whether their weight surpass the standard. At last, it shows the results in LCD. By doing this, the users are able to have a certain conclusion of their weight healthy. This paper recommends an electronic body scale using embedded technology with the S3C44BOX ARM chip produced in Samsung Company.

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