自己写了一个英语句子，请高手帮忙看有什么语法错误没。
有语法错哦，
原句：I am really disappointed as I had a friend but now we have not contact with each other. I fell she become a girl who is so snobbish.
have not contact 应改成have no contact
fell 是fall的过去时，应该改成feel， 这个词才是感觉的意思
feel后面的从句 要么用she becomes 要么用she has become 这样语法才对。
然后从句其实有点多余。
改完语法错后：I am really disappointed as I had a friend but now we have no contact with each other. I feel that she has become a girl who is so snobbish.
再提炼一下：
I am really disappointed because I am no longer in contact with one of my friends, since she has become a very snobbish girl.
①【从句】第一个定语从句（修饰society ）用对了。第二个定语从句（which makes us tired）如果是修饰cheat，那就没问题，如果是修饰competition and cheat ，makes就要改为make.
②【介词搭配】in home 应改为 at home ，注意介词的搭配。
③【词形转换】“the comfortable would be really to come into being” 中的comfortable 是 形容词，不能做主语，应改为其名词：comfort.
④【特殊句式】Only when 句型，主句应用部分倒装： Only when we are at home ，would the comfort really come into being.
总体句子结构不错。但是写句子是要注意：人称、时态、连词的使用、介词的搭配还有特殊句式等等。
希望能够帮到您！！！
One day, a student asked the teacher such a question:“why a friend can easily turn into an opponent, but an opponent can hardly turn into a friend?” The teacher answered: “because pulling down a house is easier than erecting one.”
1、单数可数名词前面不要忘了加a/an。
2、but连接的两个成分应该是并列成分，如果前面是句子，后面也应该是句子。是句子就应该有谓语动词，所以to turn应该改成can turn。
3、pulling down a house是主语，erecting one (a house)是表语，都应该用非谓语动词的形式（具体而言，都要用to do 或doing的形式），而不能用谓语动词的形式。
asked teacher
这个teacher要加修饰的 改成 his teacher 或者the teacher
“because pull down a house is easier than erect a house”
pull改成pulling
erect改成erecting
“why friend can easily turn into opponent, but opponent is hardly to turn into a friend”
friend改成friends
opponent改成opponents
OK啦~
why friends can easily turn into opponents, but It is so hard for opponents to turn into friends.
because pulling down a house is easier than erecting a house.
One day, a student asked his teacher a question:“why friends can easily turn into opponents, but opponents can hardly turn back friends again”.The teacher answered,“because pulling down a house is much easier than rebuliding one”.希望回答对您有所帮助。
One day, a student asked his teacher a question:“why friends can easily turn into opponent, but opponent is hardly to turn into a friend”.The teacher answered:“because pull down a house is easier than erect one”
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