大家看看这篇英语文章有没有文法错误,帮忙修改一下^^

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大家帮我看看这段英语有语法错误没?帮忙修改一下,麻烦大家了~

你是在写PS吗?
建议文字供你参考:
After i chose the path of law as my career, every time that i read any fictitious character of a female lawyer in a novel, i had pictured myself in her position. One character named Jennifer Parker from the novel "rage of angel" motivated me a lot, from which I have realized and now strongly believe that it is not chance but choice that determines one's fate. My destiny seemed to have beeb set by my choice of the scale when I was one year old.

还有,第一句建议还可以写成,after i decided to devote my career to justice, ... ...

还有个建议,如果你是真的在写PS,建议你就不要写抓周这种事例了,都被写滥了,没有新意了。你可以深刻发掘一下真正对你有影响的有深度的事例。如果不是在写PS就忽略我的建议。

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1. everyday是一个副词,由于你是在说理,所以最好把它放在后面,用这样的形式:
There are five hours in the morning everyday. 等等 ...

2. 每天中午你在做什么?
这是一个问你的习惯的句子,要用一般现在时而不是现在进行时。应改为:
What do you like to do at noon everyday?
晚上的那个句子也是的

3. I do not know. 最好改成 I don't know.

4. 吃晚饭,睡觉是两个并列的事情,不可以用sleeping的形式。
改成
-What do you do at night everyday?
-I have supper and get sleep.

除了以下几个有问题,其他的都没错:

Everyday what do you do in the morning ?
每天早上你在做什么?

Everyday what do you do at noon ?
每天中午你在做什么?

Have lunch and take a nap
吃午饭 睡午觉

Everyday what do you do at the afternoon ?
每天下午你在做什么?

Everyday do you do at night ?
每天晚上你在做什么?

Have supper and sleep.
吃晚饭 睡觉

把everyday放在句末,你的不符合语法习惯。

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