帮忙修改一下这篇英语作文中的语法错误
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帮忙看一下我写的这篇英语作文有什么重大语法错误，帮忙改一下，提一些写作建议。万分感激。（四级作文）
2、Welecome to our school All of our school student 句中没有标点，其中student应该是复数
3、and what is American school like改为and what American school is like
4、canmake our class more and more better 改为canmake our class better
5、We hope we can make friends of each other改为We hope we can make friends with each other
6、,we hope you can give vauaable suggestions for us.
其中的vauaable 拼写错误，是valuable,give valuable suggestions to us.
our school student 改为us shcool students
we think if you visit our school, we can ...改为 Your visit to our school make us learn more about American and American school.
more and more better 改为 much better
make friends of each other 改为make friends with each other.
give vauaable suggestions for us 改为give some valuable suggestions to us
最有一句话应写成。 That's all. Thank you.
Welecome——welcome
student ——students
American——America
more and more better——better and better
vauaable ——valuable
for——to
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一段最后一句改成Now I'd like to tell you some which you might be intrested in.
二段中间We yong people去掉we，或改成the most yong people
倒数第三行去掉kind of
2、Welecome to our school All of our school student 句中没有标点，其中student应该是复数
3、and what is American school like改为and what American school is like
4、canmake our class more and more better 改为canmake our class better
5、We hope we can make friends of each other改为We hope we can make friends with each other
6、,we hope you can give vauaable suggestions for us.
其中的vauaable 拼写错误，是valuable,give valuable suggestions to us.
our school student 改为us shcool students
we think if you visit our school, we can ...改为 Your visit to our school make us learn more about American and American school.
more and more better 改为 much better
make friends of each other 改为make friends with each other.
give vauaable suggestions for us 改为give some valuable suggestions to us
最有一句话应写成。 That's all. Thank you.
Welecome——welcome
student ——students
American——America
more and more better——better and better
vauaable ——valuable
for——to
答：1.Peter Pan, 逗号改成句号 this 首字母大写 2.改为 I first met this book because of its movie 3.The movie about Peter Pan is funny very much 改为 is very funny 4.One day,I saw a book, its name is Peter Pan. 改为 One day,I saw a book named Peter Pan.5.I had...
答：因此错。she always take care of 后面必须跟名词性结构，而 we are one family 是个句子，所以错，而且 we are one family life，逻辑错误，因为我们拥有 life，但我们本身并不是 life。另外，英语中凡是独立的句子后面一定要用句号，不能一逗到底。以下是修改后的：My family has three members, ...
答：There is some advice for you to protect our environment.At the meeting ,Mary said we should bring our shopping bagwhen we went shopping.Kate said we'd better take a bus or walk when we go out. We should drive cars less.And Mike said that we should make up some new laws...
答：that let me fall in love with travelling 改成 that made me fall in love with travelling I can not only enjoy visiting many wonderful scenery 改成 I can not only enjoy visiting many wonderful sceneries.Also I make so many new friends during the journey. 改成 Also I can ...
答：首先，我真诚接受“银雪倾城” 给我指出的错误。think是可以做及物动词，但是要有应用条件，一般接从句的时候才用作及物动词吧！个人这样认为；再一个就是英语习惯的问题，通常说：你是怎么看的，怎么认为，用think about 或者think of 的时候还是最常见。大家可以各抒己见。另外，这位同学文章里用的...
答：and solve more problems they met.Suppose I make a conclusion that they may get married and there are many children for them.楼主，你的英语表达很混乱，看了半天才改了下来。你对从句还没有懂，还有现在完成时态没有完全弄懂。连接词和介词你也要多看。希望对你有帮助。祝你学习进步。
答：1.Green color is the best color for our eyes. 中的color可以省略，因为green本来就有绿色的意思，再加color显得有点累赘。2.So we should not cut down trees and using fewer papers that they make from wood.中should后面应该加原形，所以后半部分应该改成use fewer...wood. 后面那个修饰...
答：错误：it is +adj.+that……这是一个句型 than前面应该用比较级（we are busier with study than ever）介词后面应该是动词的ing形式(about dealing with stress)the suggestion is+名词/动名词/从句（作文中的是名词，不用加that）such as 和 so on不能连用(such as playing table tennis, ...
答：While we walking around in the shop这个应该改为When we were walking aroud the shop.the salesgirl could't hear English at all.前面加个and the salesgirl couldn't understand English at all I knew it's 改成I knew it was , my mother also praised me that I gave a hand to the...
答：翻译过来是“十年后我想我会成为一个老师，因为我可以帮助很多人”因果有误，你想想你能帮助很多人是你将成为一个老师的原因还是结果呢？有两种改法：(1)I think I will be a teacher, so that I can help many people（我将成为一个老师，这样我就能帮助很多人）(2)I want to be a teacher...
