麻烦帮我翻译成英文一下, 谢谢..!

麻烦帮我翻译一下，翻译成英文，谢谢！

Hello, I order 21, why haven't treated?
Please help me to add the following goods in my order.
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Well, please my orders as soon as possible, thank you very much!

Why people are so like 3 d animation?
First of all, most of them if the circumstances are relaxed and happy, content for young and old.
Second, the expressive force of 3 d stereo sense is stronger, give a person a big impact.
Finally, the rapid development of 3 d technology, makes the future trend of animation is more strips. Watch the 3 d animation is also a kind of trend.

The company is under 500 Group, a subsidiary of IBG. During his tenure, mainly involved in receiving incoming customer orders, with the production department to contact, track orders, respond to customers. During his tenure, the company separate the task completed. And coordination of the production department and the many differences between the QC, so that "receiving orders - Production Planning - Production products - testing products - delivery - confirm that the customer receipt" process more reasonable and quick.
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The company is the world 500 strong IBG group of a subsidiary. While in office, basically participate in receiving foreign customer order, with production relation, follow up Po, respond customer. While in office, independent completed the tasks assigned by the company. And many times coordinate production and qc between existing differences make "receiving orders - production plan - production product - inspection product -- - validate customer delivery goods" process more reasonable and quick.

The company for 500 ibg group of a subsidiary company. while in office, in order to receive foreign customers, and 生产部, followed by the customers orders. while in office, independent of the company to finish the task. and many 生产部 and how the coordination between the existence of the "receiving orders, production programme, production, the product, delivery, to confirm the delivery of" customers and the process more reasonable.