请帮助修改一篇英语作文!在线等,今天必定选择答案,改的好再加!
kuaidi.ping-jia.net 作者：佚名 更新日期：2024-08-13
答：There is a fine(old比较好，没有fine tradition一说) tradition that the young should respect（pay respect to比单一的respect要好） the elder（the elderly） in China（in China最好掉到old tradition后，这样比较顺）. The tradition continues until now（这一整句改成This moral has been pre...
答：Everybody knows,reading books are good idea in our life,because sometimes a good idea changes someone’s whole life.Reading a book is as if we are communicating with a good friend.It makes us very happy and full,but some people think that reading books will waste the time for...
答：Li Fang was heart-broken.(一个句子不能有两个动词！）he couldn't afford the truth, but it is real. His girlfriend didn't come for the date."She must forget me ,as well as my love!", he thought.To his surprise,He saw his girlfriend waiting for him in the tea shop w...
答：It was 5 years after the end of Snow White’s story.I 【was working】 in my office when 【someone knocked】 【on】 my door."Come in, please," 【I said.】A fat woman 【with】 skin was as white as snow came in and took off her hat. She turned 【towards】 me,"【He...
答：She also encourages to take part in school activities. Last Friday , I held a dancing-party in school, she said she is(was) proud of me.My grandma is(去掉is) influence(inflenced) me a lot. She was a teacher before her(she) retired and she is a teacher in my life....
答：1.soom 拼写错误 应为some；2.拼写不规范，建议将speaked改为spoke；【作文评析】正确句子比例很高，但需多多加强从句的使用；请注意词汇表达的多样性及拼写错误，尤其加强学术词汇的使用；层次欠清晰，衔接成分很少。【例文】It was a bright, sunny day. I rode my bike to the park.I took some...
答：What is a meaningful life?What we called a meaningful life is that we make effects to do our best for our society.Of course it is both good for our society and ourselves if we lead a meanigful life.The meaningful life is beneficial to the society.Virtually,it will be ...
答：1.prefer to do rather than do，所以在we prefer to travel rather than to stay at home，去掉to stay中的to 2.many kinds of后面应当加上可数名词的复数形式，而island确实是可数名词，所以在There you can enjoy the beautiful scenery of many kinds of island，改成islands 3.one of the...
答：it is persistence that keeps us from quiting. Only if we learn every chance we got, can we suceed in achieving our goal. So I will continue my journey in learning English for it has become a more and more inportant part of people's life nowadays.实在改不下去，“不要动太多...
答：The college entrance examination in June this year, we, two-week Spring Festival holiday has been a luxury for us to do.How should we use reasonable two weeks away. First, as before we can not just eat and drink every day, we need to plan a reasonable time to learn.But ...
