怎么写好中考英语人际关系类高分作文

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怎么写好中考英语人际关系类高分作文

12 五.人际关系类 1 英语课堂上,老师要求学生就"与人相处"的话题展开讨论。请根据以下你所在小组的讨论结果,以"How to get on well with others"为题,写一篇英语短文。 Suggestions: 1. Learn to share 2. Respect others 3.Communicate with each other My suggestion : …… 人称: 第一人称 内容: 第一部分: 开篇点题,作为中学生应该学习如何与人相处; 第二部分:小组讨论的建议 第三部分:我的建议 语言组织: 重点词组: learn to share; respect others; communicate with each other; in my opinion; be kind to 重点句型:should do sth; It's important to do sth; We'd better do sth; It's a good idea to do sth; try to do sth As we all know, good relationship can make us happy and comfortable. But how do we get on well with others? First of all, we should respect others. Everybody has their own way to do things, so we should understand each other. Besides, it's important for us to communicate with each other. We can share happiness and sadness with our friends. What's more, we should be kind to others and try to offer necessary help to those who are in trouble. In my opinion, treating others in an honest way is also a good way to get on well with others. I am sure these suggestions will help us to get along well with others. 2 在学习与生活中你一定帮助过他人。我校校服正在开展以"我助人,我快乐"为主题的征文活动,请根据提示用英语写一篇短文,谈谈你助人的故事,让大家一起与你分享助人的快乐。 一、题目要点 1. 帮助的对象、时间、地点、原因 2. 助人的具体过程(你是如何帮助他人的) 3. 被助人的反映及你助人的感受。 二、写作提纲 时态: 一般过去时、一般现在时 人称: 第一人称;第三人称 内容:助人的故事及帮助人和被帮助人双方的感受 三、语言组织 重点词组: be good at; help with; ask sb for sth; give up; learn from; make great progress Everyone needs help and I've learned a lot from helping Mike. I was not good at math in the beginning. Months ago, my teacher asked me to help my classmate Mike with his math because he wanted to give it up after he failed some exams. Before helping him I felt a little nervous, so I went over the textbook again and again, and did lots of exercises. To my surprise, I could even work out some difficult problems that I couldn't understand before. Every day I helped Mike go over what he had learnt, I also helped him with his homework. During the weekends, we did exercises together. With my help, Mike made great progress in math. Later he even enjoyed learning it. From this experience, not only did I help him out of his trouble, but I also improved my own math. I have realized that it does everyone good to help others. Helping others is helping ourselves. 3假设你叫刘京,你在回复笔友Helen的e-mail。请你回答她的问题,针对她的问题谈谈你的看法,给她提几点建议。 解析: 这是一篇帮助朋友排忧解难的文章,主要内容涉及如何解决和父母之间的矛盾,这也是学生在日常生活中常遇到的问题,这类话题贴近学生实际,比较容易表达。此文的关键是要点要齐全,学生容易直接就写建议,而把来信中的Do you think I am right? 的回答漏掉。 一、 题目要点 1. 回答Helen的问题 2. 谈谈你的看法 3. 给Helen提几点建议 二、 写作提纲 时态: 一般现在时,一般将来时 人称: 主要是第二人称 内容:针对问题提出看法和建议 三:语言组织 重点词组:pay attention to; can be found; make a phone call; have a talk with; ask for; work hard on; no longer 重点句型:I don't think; had better do; if 从句 四, 过渡衔接 可以用一些表并列或递进的词把建议连接起来,增强文章的层次性和逻辑性,例如first, besides, also, last but not least等 一类文 Hi! Helen, Glad to hear from you, but I'm afraid you are wrong. In my opinion, we students should pay attention to study. Mobile phones are not necessary for us. They're not like books and pens. You should understand your parents and do what they ask you to do first. Now public phones can be found everywhere. If you have to make a phone call, you may use them. You'd better have a talk with your parents and tell them you won't ask them for it any longer. Besides, work hard on your lessons and read more interesting books. Last but not least, you may also tell your problem to your teachers and friends if necessary. I'm sure they'll help you. If you have more questions, please ask me. Yours, Jing 4 假设你是王威,你的朋友马华上周来信说,他的同桌上课经常找借口跟他说话,这使得他非常苦恼,不知道如何处理。请你给他写封回信,提出一些建议并帮助他解决问题。 一、题目要点 就朋友遇到的麻烦提出合理化的建议(不少于2条) 二、写作提纲 时态:一般现在时 人称:第二人称为主 内容:第一部分:开篇点题,你要给朋友提出几点建议 第二部分:你对朋友提出的解决问题的具体建议 第三部分:你对朋友的祝愿 三、 语言组织 重点词组:in trouble; talk with; heart to heart; try one's best to; after all; get on well with 重点句型:It's + adj + to do sth; you should Dear Ma Hua, I'm sorry to know that you're in trouble these days. I'm your friend and I can give you some advice to help you. First, you can find a chance after class to talk with him heart to heart. It's necessary to tell him that listening to the teacher carefully is very important so he can't talk to you in class. Then, you can ask him if he has some questions and needs your help. You should try your best to help him. After all, helping others is helping yourself. I hope my advice is useful and you can get along well with him. Yours Wang Wei

12 八、表达观点类 书面表达旨在测试学生的英语书面表达能力。中考的书面表达是一种指导性写作。试题对写作的目的、对象、体裁及字数都有明确的规定。在近几年的中考写作中,表达观点类文章的比重占得越来越多,出题形式也多种多样,有看图写作、图表、表格、书信等多种类型,但文章实际上都是议论文,有时是夹叙夹议类文章。写好该类书面表达同学们要注意以下要点: 1、观点鲜明,文章一定有一个明确的中心论点。 2、层次分明,一个中心论点通常有几个分论点支持,层次要分明,过渡要自然。 3、最后一段一般要总结全文,得出一个符合逻辑的结论,突出中心思想。 4、通常采用一般现在时。 5、语言简洁有力,一般不采用口语。 技巧点拨 一般来说,这类文章内在的逻辑关系十分清晰。它除了考查考生的英文基础,还考查考生的逻辑能力。具体说就是上下文的衔接过渡和文章层次的体现。文章段落之间的逻辑关系主要由过渡性词和短语来完成,在修辞中称为"启、承、转、合"。"启"就是开头,"承"就是承接,"转"是转折,"合"是综合或总结。 用于表示"启"的过渡性的词和短语通常用在段落或文章的开头。过渡性词和短语如下:first, first of all, at first, in the first place, firstly, to begin with, to start with, recently, now, at present, in recent years, in general, generally speaking, lately…. 用于表示"承"的过渡性的词和短语通常用在段落中的第一个扩展句中。过渡性词和短语如下:second, in addition, besides, then, moreover, what's more, what is worse, for example, certainly, obviously, in other words, still, at the same time, no doubt… 用于"转"的过渡性的词和短语通常用在段落中的第二个扩展句中。过渡性的词和短语如下:but, however, on the other hand, on the contrary, otherwise, while, despite, in spite of… 用于"合"的过渡性的词和短语通常用在段落的结论句或文章的结论段中。过渡性词和短语如下:in a word, in short, above all, after all, finally, therefore, as a result, on the whole, eventually….. 总之,要做好书面表达,需要大家把握以下几个原则:细读提示,抓要点:选择句型,准表达;确定线索,巧组合;适当发挥,保完整;规范书写,争高分;细查全文,除笔误。 写作摸板 对于表达观点类作文,文章的整体结构有一定的模式可循,可以先写对比的一方面,再写另外一方面;也可以将对比的两个方面的不同点一一比较着来写。 对比观点作文写作摸板: The topic of主题 is becoming more and more popular recently. There are two sides of opinions about it. Some people say A is their favourite. They hold their view for the reason of 理由一 . What's more, 理由二 . Moreover, 理由三 . While others think that B is a better choice in the following three reasons. First, 理由一 . Second(Besides),理由二 . Third(Finally), 理由三 . From my point of view, I think 我的观点 . The reason is that 原因 . As a matter of fact, there are some other reasons to explain my choice. For me, the former(later)is surely a wise choice. 1、学校作业多,学生嫌负担重;学校作业少,家长又担心得不得了。参考表格中所提供的信息,用英语写一篇80字左右的短文,谈谈你对这一现象的看法或态度,并明确阐述你的观点。 家长/老师 学生 多做习题 巩固所学知识 作业多 没时间运动,身体弱 多做练习 提高成绩 作业太多,厌学 如果作业少,学生贪玩(电脑游戏,电视等) 特别是周末作业多,没时间培养兴趣爱好 这是一篇图表议论文。 一、 题目要点: 1、本文的中心论题是:学校作业多,学生嫌负担重;学校作业少,家长又担心。所以首先要提出中心论题并点题。 2、从两方面来讨论这个问题,可以分成两段,先分析家长/老师的观点及理由。然后过渡到学生的观点及理由。 3、讲述自己的选择,要有鲜明的观点及支持观点的论据。 二、语言组织: 在组织语言的过程中,先用地道的英语句式将所列要点表达清楚,例如:do more work…review what they have learned…improve grades…spend time in playing…not enough time to do sports…poor health…get bored with study…..have no time to develop interests… Model 1 Many people think the more time you spend, the more work you'll do. So it is common to see students struggling in a sea of schoolwork, both at school and at home. Modern students usually have many interests. They love music, sports, reading and watching TV. But they have no time to enjoy themselves. Students are really tired of their weekend homework. They usually don't do it until Sunday night. Sometimes there is not enough time and students have to finish it carelessly. Too much homework makes students lose their interest in learning. It's also bad for their health. A horse runs faster after a rest. But for students rest alone is not enough. Such a situation should be changed to give students both pleasure and knowledge. Please give students less homework but leave them more free time. 2、随着网络的发展,人们消费观念的转变,购物方式也在悄然地发生变化。"网购"成为一种时尚,越来越多的学生也正加入到网购群体当中。请你根据以下表格的提示,写一篇网上购物的文章。 优点1、足不出户;节约时间;避免拥挤;劳累 2、价格通常较便宜; 3、可供选择的范围广,品种多。 缺点1、只看到图片,看不到商品本身 2、容易购买大量不太需要的东西;造成浪费。 一、题目要点: 1、本文的中心论题是:网上购物的优势与劣势。所以首先要提出中心论点,点题。 2、从两方面来讨论这个问题,可以分做两段,先写网上购物的优势,足不出户;节省时间;避免拥挤、劳累;价格便宜;可供选择的范围广,品种多,然后很自然地过渡到网上购物的缺点及理由,只看到图片,看不到商品本身;容易购买大量不太需要的东西,造成浪费。 3、讲述自己的选择,要有鲜明的观点及支持观点的论据。 Model 1 With the development of the Internet, many people are used to shopping online. It has become a fashion in our daily life. Some of us students also join the group. There are at least three good points of shopping online. First, people can buy what they want without going outside, which helps them avoid crowds and heavy traffic. Second, the prices of goods online are usually reasonable. Third, it offers different varieties of goods for people to choose. But there are also some bad points. The most serious one is that people can not see the goods in person. Instead, they get the information only from the pictures and the description. If they want to buy a pair of shoes, they can't try them on. Sometimes, the goods they buy are totally different from what they have expected. To make things worse, shopping online makes it easy for people to buy what they don't really need. It is a waste of money. In my opinion, I prefer going shopping to shopping online, because going shopping is a kind of enjoying life for me and I can also get what I really want. 3、假设你班上周就"Is it OK to tell white lies?"开展了一场讨论,请你根据下表所提示的信息用英语写一篇短文,简单介绍讨论的情况,并谈谈你自己的观点。 陈述方 主要观点 赞成者 1、善意的谎言是出于好意,说了不为过; 2、善意的谎言可以帮助人们友好相处; 3、善意的谎言有时候能使人增强自信。 反对者 1、善意的谎言也是谎; 2、谎言会伤害友情; 3、谎言终究不能持久。 你的观点 至少两点 一、 题目要点: 1、本文的中心论题是:"Is it OK to tell white lies?"所以首先要提出中心论点,点题。 2、从两方面来讨论这个问题,可以分成两段,先写赞成者的观点及理由,即善意的谎言是出于好意,说了不为过;可以帮助人们友好相处;有时候能使人增强自信。然后很自然地过渡到反对者的观点及理由,即善意的谎言也是谎;会伤害友情;终究不能持久。 Last week our class had a discussion on whether it is OK to tell white lies. The students have many opinions. Some students support the opinion. They hold the view that telling white lies doesn't matter much as long as it is out of kindness, especially when a friend is facing failure. Sometimes, white lies can encourage people to stick to what they are doing. However, every coin has two sides. Other students oppose the opinion. They believe white lies are always lies. They also convey the meaning of cheating. To make things worse, white lies hurt people's feelings, so they do harm to friendship. Meanwhile, lies never go far. In my opinion, although white lies are lies, they are necessary in our daily life. After all, not everyone dares to face reality bravely. 4、目前有不少历史剧在电视上热播。有人通过看历史剧来了解历史,有人选择读史书来了解历史。你的选择及理由是什么?请你根据以下内容写一篇英语短文。 选择 理由 看历史剧 情节有趣,通俗易懂 读历史书 资料真实,引人深思 你的选择 ? 这是一篇议论文。 一、题目要点:1、本文的中心论题是:通过什么样的方式了解历史。所以首先要提出中心论题,点题。2、从两方面来讨论这个问题,可以分成两段,先通过看历史剧来了解历史的方式及理由,然后很自然地过渡到通过读历史书来了解历史的方式及理由。3、讲述自己的选择,要有鲜明的观点及支持观点的论据。

1 英语课堂上,老师要求学生就"与人相处"的话题展开讨论。请根据以下你所在小组的讨论结果,以"How to get on well with others"为题,写一篇英语短文。
   Suggestions: 1. Learn to share
   2. Respect others
   3.Communicate with each
other
   My suggestion : ……
  人称: 第一人称
  内容: 第一部分: 开篇点题,作为中学生应该学习如何与人相处;
   第二部分:小组讨论的建议
   第三部分:我的建议
  语言组织:
  重点词组: learn to share; respect others; communicate with each other; in my opinion; be kind to
  重点句型:should do sth; It's important to do sth; We'd better do sth; It's a good idea to do sth; try to do sth
  As we all know, good relationship can make us happy and comfortable. But how do we get on well with others?
  First of all, we should respect others. Everybody has their own way to do things, so we should understand each other. Besides, it's important for us to communicate with each other. We can share happiness and sadness with our friends. What's more, we should be kind to others and try to offer necessary help to those who are in trouble.
  In my opinion, treating others in an honest way is also a good way to get on well with others. I am sure these suggestions will help us to get along well with others.
  2 在学习与生活中你一定帮助过他人。我校校服正在开展以"我助人,我快乐"为主题的征文活动,请根据提示用英语写一篇短文,谈谈你助人的故事,让大家一起与你分享助人的快乐。
  一、题目要点
  1. 帮助的对象、时间、地点、原因
  2. 助人的具体过程(你是如何帮助他人的)
  3. 被助人的反映及你助人的感受。
  二、写作提纲
  时态: 一般过去时、一般现在时
  人称: 第一人称;第三人称
  内容:助人的故事及帮助人和被帮助人双方的感受
  三、语言组织
  重点词组: be good at; help with; ask sb for sth; give up; learn from; make great progress
  Everyone needs help and I've learned a lot from helping Mike.
  I was not good at math in the beginning. Months ago, my teacher asked me to help my classmate Mike with his math because he wanted to give it up after he failed some exams. Before helping him I felt a little nervous, so I went over the textbook again and again, and did lots of exercises. To my surprise, I could even work out some difficult problems that I couldn't understand before. Every day I helped Mike go over what he had learnt, I also helped him with his homework. During the weekends, we did exercises together. With my help, Mike made great progress in math. Later he even enjoyed learning it.
  From this experience, not only did I help him out of his trouble, but I also improved my own math. I have realized that it does everyone good to help others. Helping others is helping ourselves.
  3假设你叫刘京,你在回复笔友Helen的e-mail。请你回答她的问题,针对她的问题谈谈你的看法,给她提几点建议。
  解析:
  这是一篇帮助朋友排忧解难的文章,主要内容涉及如何解决和父母之间的矛盾,这也是学生在日常生活中常遇到的问题,这类话题贴近学生实际,比较容易表达。此文的关键是要点要齐全,学生容易直接就写建议,而把来信中的Do you think I am right? 的回答漏掉。
  一、 题目要点
  1. 回答Helen的问题
  2. 谈谈你的看法
  3. 给Helen提几点建议
  二、 写作提纲
  时态: 一般现在时,一般将来时
  人称: 主要是第二人称
  内容:针对问题提出看法和建议
  三:语言组织
  重点词组:pay attention to; can be found; make a phone call; have a talk with; ask for; work hard on; no longer
  重点句型:I don't think; had better do; if 从句
  四, 过渡衔接
  可以用一些表并列或递进的词把建议连接起来,增强文章的层次性和逻辑性,例如first, besides, also, last but not least等

网上有很多相关的英语作文,英语作文主要是套模板,多看看范文就行。注意书写时候的语法。

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