梦想家园(现在时态) 英语小作文 急
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1. The phone is ringing . Please answer it. (ring)
2. Look! Your baby is smiling . (smile)
3. Listen! Somebody is singing in the next room. (sing)
4. Mr Smith is reading a book now. (read)
5. The Smiths are watching TV now. (watch)
6. Joyce and Joseph are pushing a car now. (push)
7. A girl and her friends are drinking tea at the moment. (drink)
8. Slow the car down. You are driving too fast. (drive)
9. We are beginning to plan our holiday now. (begin) 可以考虑进行时态。
10. The woman is writing a novel these days. (write)
给两篇范文 不是我写的 来自http://www.pequip.com.cn/a/201308/238993655.html
二、假设你家附近有一个动物园,请根据所给提示词写一篇短文,介绍一下你在那儿看到了哪些动物,它们有哪些特点。要求:用上所有提示词汇; 60 词左右。
提示词: zoo, animals, kind of, like, because, interesting
There is a zoo near my home. It’s big. I often go there and see animals. There are many different kinds of animals in it: monkeys, pandas, tigers and many other animals. Koalas are my favorite, because they are very cute. Dolphins are kind of smart. Giraffes are very tall and beautiful. Tigers are strong and elephants are very big. All of the animals are very interesting. I like them very much.
三、 假如你叔叔是一名警察。请根据提示词汇写一篇短文,介绍一下你叔叔的情况。要求:条理清楚,语句通顺;不少于60 词。
提示词: early, late, help students go across, the lost people, find, fight with ( 打击 ), thieves, safe ( 安全的 ), busy, dangerous
My uncle is a policeman. He goes to work early and comes back very late every day. Sometimes he helps students go across the streets. Sometimes he helps the lost people find their homes. And at other times, he fights with thieves to keep families and people safe. His job is busy and dangerous, but it’s good for people. My uncle is great. I like him very much.
One possible version : My Dream Home My dream home is at the foot of a hill. It is very big. There are three floors. There is a big garden and a green house in front of the house. Behind the house there is a basketball court. On the ground floor there is a swimming pool, a home cinema and a game room. On the first floor, there is a sitting room, a dining room and a kitchen. On the second floor, there is a bedroom for my parents. My elder brother and my younger brother share a bedroom. I have my own room. I hope my dream will come true. 试题分析:这是一篇给材料作文,介绍我梦想的家。结合所给材料,可知本文主要考查一般现在时态,人称为单数第一,三人称,注意主谓一致问题,句子结构主要为系表结构,注意一些常见句式的应用,比如:It is .....There are......及I hope ......等句式的应用。写作中注意运用代词,注意多种句式交替运用。写作中注意叙述顺序,符合逻辑关系,注意文后要表达希望自己梦想成真。【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑,语言简练。开头介绍了我梦想的家的位置,接下来介绍梦想的家的设施和结构,最后希望自己的梦想能实现。此处用了 in front of , On the ground floor, my own room等这些词组的运用也让文章增色不少。
My dream home is very big .It has three floors.On the ground floor,there are two sitting-rooms,two kitchens and a very large sport room.
I can play ball with my friends in the sport room.
There are fifthteen bedrooms on the first floor. If many friends come to my home,they can live with me together on the first floor.There are bathrooms in each bedroom,too.So all my friends can have a bath.
On the second floor ,there is a big swimming pool. My friend can swim in summer.
I hope I can get a house like thse.