帮我看一下这篇英语作文有什么语法错误没有,应该不多。。
没有看大你的这篇英语作文,其实英语作文不要用太复杂的句型就、语法,不然可读性不强,建议多积累一些词汇和常用句型,更加分
你的作文写得很棒!思路清晰,观点例子也完善。中间有一点语法错误。希望继续努力。一下是我的修改,期望你的文章会更好。I think that we should grow up with good books, especially during the period of our studying. Because the good books can provide benificial knowledges to us. They can not only make us to be a person with lots of knowledge, but alos can tach us to be a kind and knowldgeable person which do pa graet help to our growing up. Although the books are lifeless and cannot talk like our human beings, thay can talk with us by the informational workds which teach us a lot in many aspects. Tese inforamtion are opercious for they can make us grow up more healthily and happily. For example, they can teach us how to survive in an dangerous condition, how to do things correctly etc. So i do think our growing up can not be devided with the good books. At the same time, we should make good use of the good books.
大毛病没有,一些小细节改善一下就好了。第二段,lesson后面最好用句号,然后next第一个字母大写。and then 那里也一样,最好重新开始一句,便于句子的理解,也更符合英语的习惯。
再有就是在not only 前应该加should,才能表达出你是建议她去怎么做。
还有,开头是dear Li Hua ,最后署名也是Li Hua 。。。
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