找个英语高人,帮我看看这篇文章有没有语法错误,字母错误等。(悬赏80)
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英语老师帮我看看这篇文章有没有什么语法错误
同学,我帮你重新写了一下,不过我还是要说,对于一个13岁得学生来说,你的英文真的非常不错了,希望你继续认真学习英语,坚持不懈,更上一层楼,加油!
you have worked hard, 这句读不通,没什么意义
I began to introduce myself 改为I begin to introduce myself
My name is Chen Jia, in the sixth grade in Ji Shi school, this year 13 years old.改为 My name is Chen Jia, I am in grade six in Ji Shi school, and i am 13 years old.
I most like the color is green改为i ;ike green best
My introduction finished改为 My introduction is finished
below I say why I came to this school, this is the most important改为 next I am going to say why I want to come to this school, this is the most important thing
你用翻译软件的吧这么多错
1、you have worked hard太生硬……改为Itˊs my honor to stand here and give an introduce to you 更好些
2、 I wish you a Pepsi, good luck 逗号处最好改为and,衔接才流畅
3、I began to introduce myself.也太生硬。可以说Now I´d like to introduce myself
4、Chen Jia, in the 逗号处加 I´m,13 years old前面也加 I´m
5、I most like the color is green也不对,可以说My favorite color is green 或I like green best
6、drawing, reading逗号处也应是and
7、 My introduction finished改为Now I have finished my introduce
8、 below I say why I came to this school, this is the most important改为Here is the reason of my coming to this school,and I think this is the most important.
改的很辛苦啊啊啊~~还有不懂可以追问哦~
你使用的是地道的中式英语翻译法,直接帮你重新写了:
Hello,my dear teacher, you hard working is highly appreciated, and I wish you everything goes well and good luck! 您好,老师,您辛苦了,祝您好运常伴,万事如意!Please kindly let me introduce myself. 下面请允许我作自我介绍。 My name is Chen Jia, in the sixth grade in Ji Shi school, and I'm 13 years old. 我叫陈佳,在济师附小就读六年级,今年13岁。I like green much more than any other color, becacuse I consider green full of vitality, like youth, full of vigor and vitality. 我最喜欢的颜色是绿色,我认为绿色充满生机,就像青春一样,充满蓬勃朝气。I like drawing, reading. 我喜欢绘画、读书。 My motto is我的座右铭是Time is gold and it is difficult for one to use gold to get time.一寸光阴一寸金,寸金难买寸光阴。
.That's it, 我的自我介绍做完了, Next I will tell you why I choosed this school, which is the most important part. 下面我说一说我为什么要来这所学校,这才是最主要的。
我觉得你的文章是中式英文,感觉语法没什么错但是很不地道,这几个方面该一下比较好:you are working hard ;in grade six,Ji Shi Primary school;my age is ……;把I most like 改为My favourite;full off前面加is;youth前面加the这样会更好。
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Watching movies is lots of people's fondness.
第二句最后最好还是加一个of movies,虽然有点重复但你这样拗口
they include 不加s
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watch a moive,不是see
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in front of her mirror我认为in front of the mirror更好
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最后应该为 the mother asked.
3."So I can see what I look like when I'm asleep." she replied.
so应该为because
英语学得很好嘛
继续努力 下次不要犯同样的错误
同学,我帮你重新写了一下,不过我还是要说,对于一个13岁得学生来说,你的英文真的非常不错了,希望你继续认真学习英语,坚持不懈,更上一层楼,加油!
you have worked hard, 这句读不通,没什么意义
I began to introduce myself 改为I begin to introduce myself
My name is Chen Jia, in the sixth grade in Ji Shi school, this year 13 years old.改为 My name is Chen Jia, I am in grade six in Ji Shi school, and i am 13 years old.
I most like the color is green改为i ;ike green best
My introduction finished改为 My introduction is finished
below I say why I came to this school, this is the most important改为 next I am going to say why I want to come to this school, this is the most important thing
你用翻译软件的吧这么多错
1、you have worked hard太生硬……改为Itˊs my honor to stand here and give an introduce to you 更好些
2、 I wish you a Pepsi, good luck 逗号处最好改为and,衔接才流畅
3、I began to introduce myself.也太生硬。可以说Now I´d like to introduce myself
4、Chen Jia, in the 逗号处加 I´m,13 years old前面也加 I´m
5、I most like the color is green也不对,可以说My favorite color is green 或I like green best
6、drawing, reading逗号处也应是and
7、 My introduction finished改为Now I have finished my introduce
8、 below I say why I came to this school, this is the most important改为Here is the reason of my coming to this school,and I think this is the most important.
改的很辛苦啊啊啊~~还有不懂可以追问哦~
你使用的是地道的中式英语翻译法,直接帮你重新写了:
Hello,my dear teacher, you hard working is highly appreciated, and I wish you everything goes well and good luck! 您好,老师,您辛苦了,祝您好运常伴,万事如意!Please kindly let me introduce myself. 下面请允许我作自我介绍。 My name is Chen Jia, in the sixth grade in Ji Shi school, and I'm 13 years old. 我叫陈佳,在济师附小就读六年级,今年13岁。I like green much more than any other color, becacuse I consider green full of vitality, like youth, full of vigor and vitality. 我最喜欢的颜色是绿色,我认为绿色充满生机,就像青春一样,充满蓬勃朝气。I like drawing, reading. 我喜欢绘画、读书。 My motto is我的座右铭是Time is gold and it is difficult for one to use gold to get time.一寸光阴一寸金,寸金难买寸光阴。
.That's it, 我的自我介绍做完了, Next I will tell you why I choosed this school, which is the most important part. 下面我说一说我为什么要来这所学校,这才是最主要的。
我觉得你的文章是中式英文,感觉语法没什么错但是很不地道,这几个方面该一下比较好:you are working hard ;in grade six,Ji Shi Primary school;my age is ……;把I most like 改为My favourite;full off前面加is;youth前面加the这样会更好。
答:The thing flows the cost to have generalized and division of thenarrow sense. The narrow sense thing flows the cost only to refer toexpense and so on transportation, packing, loading and unloading whichproduces as a result of the goods migration. The generalized thingflows the cost ...
答:圣文森特和格林纳丁斯) ,是跨 形成霍尔21日到异国情调的世界 加勒比地区的经验,其中每一 该群岛中提出自己的路。巴巴多斯是展示了令人印象深刻 其丰富的海底世界,这 游客可欣赏的复制品 庆祝哈里森的洞穴。圣文森特和格林纳丁斯已 抓获他们的水下世界 电影,并且将显示在该影片 底部的三个油桶填补 水...
答:在欧洲,百分之十五的自然灾害死亡人数也是由泥石流造成。在12月,菲律宾一次泥石流造成200多人死亡。让工人用钢筋水泥加固山坡可以帮助防止灾难,但是这带来新的问题。震动钻孔产生有害灰尘,并且使危险碎片松动。“那是比较危险的工作,”D’ Appolonia(一个 意大利工程公司)的Giorgio Pezzuzo。D’ ...
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答:背诵和重复在交谈。When you hear a person’s name,repeat it.Immediately say it to yourself several times without moving your lips.You could also repeat the name in a way that does not sound forced or artificial.当你听到一个人的名字,重复it.Immediately说自己没有几次移动你的lips...
答:我有时会显得局促不安,但其实,我的感觉就好象赢取了百万美圆一样。我们坐进别克车,妈妈会载我去跳舞。分手时,她会跟我说“好好玩,玩得开心!”两小时后她会再来接我回家。和一个8年级的可爱女生跳慢舞,这让我的心砰砰直跳。之后妈妈总会问我“玩得开心吗?和那些漂亮的女孩们跳舞了吗?”...
答:标题不是很全面我就不翻译了:一年前的八月,大卫福斯失去了在密歇根西部的一个小公司开卡车的工作,他的妻子格里尔,还在当地学校的餐厅里工作,但是大卫没有工作,同时所有东西的物价都在上涨,福斯一家快要和最近诸多美国人一样要无家可归了。然而大卫和格里尔收到一个及时的礼物——7000美元,来自...
答:并且,几十多家的旅馆、办公楼、购物商场和餐馆也响应了这项熄灯一小时的活动。人们通过参与烛光晚餐或星光派对来响应活动。然而,有些评论家却反对这种活动,认为它仅仅是一种不实用的花样,不能解决问题的根本。在我看来,地球一小时一种对每个人、企业和全体大众的呼唤。呼唤大家都行动起来,自觉地投身...
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