帮我看看这段话有没有语法上的错误？
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求帮忙看看这段话有没有语法上的错误？怎么改进？谢谢！
This story（既然是story，就应该全部用过去时。） is about a high school girl, called Miya.
She（建议用Miya） is（was） a girl, who has（had） a mother but no father.
She is（was） so common(common形容人不是很好，建议用ordinary) in his（应该是her） class that （建议加上even） her teachers can't（didn’t，不应该用can’t） know her name.
All of a sudden, when（when应该接过去时） she is（所以应该用was） told that she is（was） a princess of another country---the future successor ,she is（was） more than pleased.
And then,she becomes（became） a focus in media.
However,after all,（这两个词其实意思上重复，建议去掉after all）she was brought up in a poor family,and（brought up in a poor family和had no elegant royal quality并不是并列关系，而是因果关系，建议：For the reason that she was was brought up in a poor family,she had no elegant royal quality. ） she has（had） no elegant royal qualities（既然前面用no,这里应该用单数quality）.
To train her to own these（these指代不明，前文根本没有提及指的是什么，应该用some） （建议加上elegant，因为上文有提及）royal qualities,her grandmother spent（spend） great efforts on her .
In her （her指代不明，应该用her grandmother’s） training,she would like to give up this （应该用the，this指代不明）position as princess（a princess 因为下面是a princess，而且也应该加a） ,so she faces（faced） a decision （face a decision？搭配不当。应该用face a problem）whether to be a princess or not....
谢谢。。。
This story is about a high school girl, called Miya.She is a girl,who has a mother but no father.She is so common in his(her) class that her teachers can't know her name(这个定于从句用错了改成class in which all the teacher can't remember her name).All of a(the) sudden,(这句话可以先去掉) when she is told that she is a princess of another country---the future successor ,she is more than pleased.And then,she becomes a focus in media.However,after all,she was brought up in a poor family,so she has no elegant royal qualities.To train her to own these royal qualities,her grandmother spent great efforts on her .During her training,she would like to give up this position as princess ,so she faces a decision whether to be a princess or not....
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谁帮我看看这段话有没有语法错误,帮我加上几句话也行!谢谢
答：那么在第2个句子句首就需要加AND ，BUT ，OR等连词，根据文章的语境和大意的话，你这个句子是加BUT，但是如果你把这两个句子中间的标点改成句号的话，也是对的，或者改成分号。但这里最佳的改法应该是加连词BUT：My body says let's go,but my heart says no ...
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没有语法错误。很漂亮的一段离别留言。
以下只是就原文做出的修改：This story（既然是story，就应该全部用过去时。） is about a high school girl, called Miya.
She（建议用Miya） is（was） a girl, who has（had） a mother but no father.
She is（was） so common(common形容人不是很好，建议用ordinary) in his（应该是her） class that （建议加上even） her teachers can't（didn’t，不应该用can’t） know her name.
All of a sudden, when（when应该接过去时） she is（所以应该用was） told that she is（was） a princess of another country---the future successor ,she is（was） more than pleased.
And then,she becomes（became） a focus in media.
However,after all,（这两个词其实意思上重复，建议去掉after all）she was brought up in a poor family,and（brought up in a poor family和had no elegant royal quality并不是并列关系，而是因果关系，建议：For the reason that she was was brought up in a poor family,she had no elegant royal quality. ） she has（had） no elegant royal qualities（既然前面用no,这里应该用单数quality）.
To train her to own these（these指代不明，前文根本没有提及指的是什么，应该用some） （建议加上elegant，因为上文有提及）royal qualities,her grandmother spent（spend） great efforts on her .
In her （her指代不明，应该用her grandmother’s） training,she would like to give up this （应该用the，this指代不明）position as princess（a princess 因为下面是a princess，而且也应该加a） ,so she faces（faced） a decision （face a decision？搭配不当。应该用face a problem）whether to be a princess or not....
谢谢。。。
This story is about a high school girl, called Miya.She is a girl,who has a mother but no father.She is so common in his(her) class that her teachers can't know her name(这个定于从句用错了改成class in which all the teacher can't remember her name).All of a(the) sudden,(这句话可以先去掉) when she is told that she is a princess of another country---the future successor ,she is more than pleased.And then,she becomes a focus in media.However,after all,she was brought up in a poor family,so she has no elegant royal qualities.To train her to own these royal qualities,her grandmother spent great efforts on her .During her training,she would like to give up this position as princess ,so she faces a decision whether to be a princess or not....
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答：那么在第2个句子句首就需要加AND ，BUT ，OR等连词，根据文章的语境和大意的话，你这个句子是加BUT，但是如果你把这两个句子中间的标点改成句号的话，也是对的，或者改成分号。但这里最佳的改法应该是加连词BUT：My body says let's go,but my heart says no ...
答：首先，system后面的the应该改为that， 定语从句。develop a system that requires short lead times.这里that指代system。不知道是不是打错了。第二个，老师说的两个否定词，我觉得语法没有问题，只是两个减少都用decrease有点重复，可以换一个动词，reduce，或lower什么的。
答：if you want to eat some delicious food in the resterant有错。restaurant 餐馆 it is quit expensive and waste time有错。quiet expensive and前后应该是并列的结构，前面用形容词，后面也应该是，所以waste time改成time-comsuming。另外，这句作为论点有点奇怪。In one word有错。总之是in a ...
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答：不是misunderstanded。第一句在poor之前的so也可以删掉。information后面加的应该是for而不是of，而connerctor这个也是个肯定的拼音错误，正确是connector。我认为应该是from SMA而不是with SMA，因为是从SMA获取讯息嘛。这个加楼上的那个you want how much的修改就会让这短篇文字更易阅读。
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答：忧伤从何而来？It is only a（an） abyss 那是一个深渊。这貌似一首小诗，还挺有意境的，不过似乎不太地道。。。外国人的文学，思维和我们大不一样啊~~~有些东西可能语法是不通的，但是那时修辞罢了，所以如果这是古典文学，就没有必要深究其语法了。就像中国文学中：我离她那么近，却又是那么...
答：2）删去逗号，但是how proud I was of you ，这一句没有语法错误。因为整句的翻译是：迟早（有一天）你会明白，我曾经有多么以你为豪。但是，楼下的说was 换成am也是可以解释的。意为：迟早（有一天）你会明白，我是多么以你为豪。（这个是表示一直“以你为豪”，而上面只是表示曾经，因为was是...
答：仔细看完，写得很好，没有语法问题。不过有两处个人觉得可以稍作调整：1.massive bloodshed,colonization,wars and massacres四个词是否可以区分一下逻辑上的因果层次——by wars that had caused/ had brought about colonization,massacres and massive bloodshed.2.读下来，我感觉你是站在第三者视角写...
答：do sth, to do sth, and to do sth）2）主谓一致（简而言之：they+v.复数形式，it+v.单数形式）诚实地说，中文翻译恕晚辈无能，这英语写的就算没语法错误，逻辑上也doesn't make sense 还是请教创造此句的那位大神吧^^;若有任何additional questions,随时乐意为您解答！！希望采纳>< ...
